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Carlos_Balbizan
Carlos_BalbizanLv12yrCarlos_Balbizan

it's kind of boring to compare to other stories, but i would recommend reading "as chronicas de vali masters" (everything missing here is there) the plot is forced to stay the same, even when the MC changes a lot (and this without any real justification , just padding), writing and development as a whole need a big improvement. and I'm not talking about changing the MC's personality, but about the author's own mistakes to force the story when I mention the other book

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Mikaelson Family Across The Multiverse

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_EMI_
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Thank you for your input, I'll try to improve.

Carlos_Balbizan
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by the way, even the story I mentioned has many errors, like the beginning was forced, and how he simply threw the story in the trash to make it go to other dimensions without a proper reason besides the people close to him throwing him in another dimension, without no explanation of how this could be possible. if you are reading it, ignore the 2nd world completely as it is unnecessary, and I would also recommend a slower story and not as rough as the one I recommended, as it kind of moved too fast and lost a lot that would be useful to prolong the story. . sorry i got a little carried away writing hehe

_EMI_:Thank you for your input, I'll try to improve.
Kw0z
Kw0zLv14Kw0z

I’m not too sure where you’re coming from. The ending of the fanfic you’re recommending was terrible. He was betrayed by everyone expect for one girl, and he killed her right after.

Carlos_Balbizan
Carlos_BalbizanLv1Carlos_Balbizan

did you really read the story I mentioned? Or did you just read the ending without context that the author created? and he was betrayed because of his deeds, playing and manipulating all humanity just to create a way to kill him or take him to another plane, because he was already bored... and he also let himself be betrayed

Kw0z:I’m not too sure where you’re coming from. The ending of the fanfic you’re recommending was terrible. He was betrayed by everyone expect for one girl, and he killed her right after.
Carlos_Balbizan
Carlos_BalbizanLv1Carlos_Balbizan

and in case you're talking about the next worlds he went to, I don't have an adequate answer to that because you may be right, since I stopped reading from the moment he switched worlds, because the quality dropped greatly

Kw0z:I’m not too sure where you’re coming from. The ending of the fanfic you’re recommending was terrible. He was betrayed by everyone expect for one girl, and he killed her right after.
Kw0z
Kw0zLv14Kw0z

I did read it, and my opinion is still the same. It just leaves a bad taste in my mouth that he was betrayed by his own daughter, and multiple other people. It doesn’t matter if he let himself be betrayed.

Carlos_Balbizan:did you really read the story I mentioned? Or did you just read the ending without context that the author created? and he was betrayed because of his deeds, playing and manipulating all humanity just to create a way to kill him or take him to another plane, because he was already bored... and he also let himself be betrayed
Kw0z
Kw0zLv14Kw0z

Also, I dropped the fanfic when he changed worlds too. It got pretty boring.

Carlos_Balbizan:and in case you're talking about the next worlds he went to, I don't have an adequate answer to that because you may be right, since I stopped reading from the moment he switched worlds, because the quality dropped greatly