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Although they did not make the play-off round, Ivory Coast complete the top 10 best footballing countries in Africa while DR Congo, who led Group J, overtook South Africa to take the 12th spot with 1375.64 points (+18.03). Bafana Bafana are 13th on the continent having gathered 1358.24 points (-3.37). Uganda occupy the 16th spot after accumulating 1285.28 points while Kenya are 22nd with 1202.26 points and Tanzania are 37th with 1118.76 points.
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Iβm not sure if itβs the author or the translator but itβs not very consistent. At one point it says that rank 5s are the strongest and there are no rank 6 magisters. Later itβs said that there are rank 6s and even higher ranks too. At another point they use the term magic cores. A few sentences later they say monster cores. Then it goes back to magic cores. The charcterβs names change too. At one point itβs Hill and then the next itβs Hila. Itβs pretty early on so I canβt say much about the story so far. The consistency of the characters so far though is not great. The main character pulls and holds a beautiful examinerβs waist after they saw each other for a total of a few minutes. I believe it was also their first time actually talking and she was still fine with it. Later when he is having dinner with this woman he slaps a rich guy because he insulted weak magisters. The guy wasnβt even talking to him. Honestly this just looks like the author trying to forcefully create drama. The world building seems pretty generic with not much of it explored yet. Overall Iβd say itβs okay to pass the time with. Itβs still pretty early so it may get better later.
As more and more of these novels come out i can't help but notice the blatant unoriginallity of them all. I won't delve deeper in my criticisms for the writing, only leaving with the observation that it is very fast pace and bland. What i will however file my full complaint with is the TERRIBLE characters. For one they are not portrayed as humans, merely npcs that, after explaining something or merely being there to expunge some word count, dissapear and are rarely if ever characterized or brought up again. This lazy negative aspect is no better portrayed then when these novels describe the main character. Sloppily throwing out vague descriptions with no interesting details. You see it in every one of these novels, "he's hadsome". As if there wasn't any more apparent way of showing that you really didn't care and only wrote this to get a paycheck. Every character is a formulaic redundancy so predictable that i can accurately foretell what they're going to say. This is a grave novel sin. A novel is supposed to give its reader a sort of mystery, in that it reveals its content in unpredictable ways. keeping the readers attention and interest in tandem. You can't do this very well when every other story is a copy of every other story, it's like taking the same bus to work every day, after a while the trip becomes tedious. In conclusion this story isn't a bad story, fiver years ago.