It starts out okay with an intresting premise but it’s ruined by the nationalism. I’m guessing the author got in trouble for not having enough nationalism so he went overboard. A character who is a foreigner is suddenly stated to have seven-eigths bloodline from the nine provinces (China) out of nowhere. Im guessing this might be because having a genius not from China is a big no-no. It later states this is why the headmaster accepted him as a student and he wouldn’t have otherwise. The main charcter’s feats are repeatedly stated to show how glorious they were with 5000 years of history. This is mentioned so many times I usually just skim a few paragraphs when it comes up. The patriotism would be fine if it weren’t for the author degrading other countries to make China seem superior.

Light travels around 300,000 kilometers in a second. Multiply that by the minute(60), hour(60), day(24), and then year(365) and that’s 1 light year. Then multiply that by 10 to get the distance traveled.

You know. A casual 94 trillion kilometers in a few seconds from the shockwaves. I’m surprised there’s still a planet left.

I’m not sure if it’s the author or the translator but it’s not very consistent. At one point it says that rank 5s are the strongest and there are no rank 6 magisters. Later it’s said that there are rank 6s and even higher ranks too. At another point they use the term magic cores. A few sentences later they say monster cores. Then it goes back to magic cores. The charcter’s names change too. At one point it’s Hill and then the next it’s Hila. It’s pretty early on so I can’t say much about the story so far. The consistency of the characters so far though is not great. The main character pulls and holds a beautiful examiner’s waist after they saw each other for a total of a few minutes. I believe it was also their first time actually talking and she was still fine with it. Later when he is having dinner with this woman he slaps a rich guy because he insulted weak magisters. The guy wasn’t even talking to him. Honestly this just looks like the author trying to forcefully create drama. The world building seems pretty generic with not much of it explored yet. Overall I’d say it’s okay to pass the time with. It’s still pretty early so it may get better later.

The first couple of chapters are horrendously translated. It gets better later on but it’s still not great. Also the story isn’t consistent. One chapter he upgrades an artifact from 1 minute of usage to 100 minutes. A few chapters later it’s back to 1 minute. In another chapter it states a beast is a mid gold tier. In the next paragraph it says early gold tier. Also, at this point im confused on a lot of things. Is the only thing that has matters is how high of a quality a pet is? How do pets get stronger? Can a lower quality pet with a higher grade defeat a higher quality one? Not much is really explained for most things; it’s very vague. Overall it’s fine if you just skim through it without thinking too much. As long as you ignore the plot holes and sub-par translation you could read this as a way to pass time.

TL;DR: It’s bad. The story is bad but the bad translation makes it even worse. The main character is also pretty stupid and other characters are also unrealistic. Futhermore the main character’s attitude towards other countries makes me believe the story will get racist in the future. Let’s start with my first problem. Why is the prettiest and smartest girl in class suddenly defending him despite having no relation prior? The main character even says they never had much to do with each other so why? She even chooses to risk her future to go to the same world for him. Obviously with more people going to the same world the more competition there would be. Yet she still chooses to follow him even after he ignores her act of kindness to resolve the grudge between him and a young master. He states publicly that he’ll ruin the young master and his family despite having nothing to do so (didn’t have his overpowered system yet). Seeing this, I had already see the massive plot armor he’ll have to save him from his stupidity. The body he reincarnates into is broke and his girlfriend is just ditching him. Yet he shaves and becomes a massive hunk immediately attracting a bunch of girls. They state he’s hotter than some models so why couldn’t the body’s owner be one? We’re given no further information of his previous life before he powers up to the strongest person on the planet in a second. It’s like the poor circumstances weren’t even there. The young master holding a grudge on the main character for 10 years is also pretty stupid. You’d think he’d get smarter being in a large family for 10 years. He apparently made his family stronger and is also stated to be cunning. His actions really don’t show that though.

Reveled means to party or celebrate.

The first glaring problem i found was the world building. I have no idea where this is, what year it is, not even the surroundings are vaguely described. Even after reading about 15-20 chapters, I still have no idea what the main character looks like or how old he is. The government, if you can call it that, is essentially nonexistant. People with superpowers where the lowest level is probably near a grenade run around freely. They are essentially military assets at this point. Even if they were allowed to run around, it should be with restrictions. Apparently they also don’t have anything to watch the dungeons despite it being a massive military asset. The main character progresses an entire tier after after a few dungeon runs. If one higher tier person runs a dungeon a few times, they can create thier own military force. The fact that no one has thought of this shows how smart the characters are. TL;DR: The lack of descriptions going even slightly in depth kills the reading experience. I had to stop reading many times to try and rationalize things.