It would keep the story nearly following the original plot while still having a difference, The only reason I see not to do this would be because in the original she stopped being an adventure after this, I think it was due to her familia dying/other reasons. However I do believe if your trying to keep close but not the same to the original story (don't remember what you said regarding this topic.) then this could be a good plot point to try out.

prison school

I read this whole fanfic because of this recommendation. Thanks! it was very interesting and a good read I do however ask if you have more criminal minds fanfic (perferbly like this one with JJ) however if not then just keep posting I've tried to find good fanfics on fanfiction net however I've been unable and these are some of the best ones I've read. Thanks again!

I have read 4 of the story's you have posted on here they have been amazing. I my self go through fanfiction net to find stuff to read but I can never really find anything good. Keep up the good work and thank you!

Okay that makes a little more sense I just didn't understand what was happening *smile*

I'm sorry but what does this mean. It's been happening and I just can't understand this s**t about contacting a website.

I love this story the main character is what I like to see he is smart strong and good at what he does I feel like this book will be even better latter into the book.

I enjoyed this novel so far I can't say much about the update stability because I have not been with this book long enough to find it out, everything else is generally good I can only remember a few errors other than that amazing.