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TYErannical

TYErannical

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An unimpressive novelist

2017-11-17 JoinedUnited States
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  • TYErannical
    TYErannical6mth
    Posted

    loved the beginning and a huge chunk of the middle of the story, but iIhad to stop reading when the main character started having sex with his sister it's honestly bizarre, i can't fathom why you thought that was a good idea. just weird and gross.

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    Tyranny of Steel
    History · Zentmeister
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  • TYErannical
    TYErannical2yr
    Commented

    That doesn't mean he contradicted himself

    There was a contradiction in Zhou Hongsong's statement!
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    God-Like Extraction
    Eastern · Fruit of Chaos
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  • TYErannical
    TYErannical2yr
    Posted

    really enjoying this so far. takes a leisurely yet entertaining pace that leaves you enjoying the progression of the story. This is definitely a gem in an otherwise dissapointing summer showcase.

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    I Have A Martial Arts Panel
    Action · Vanguard Flaming Pig
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  • TYErannical
    TYErannical2yr
    Commented

    wut?

    His facial features were three-dimensional, like a knife cutting an axe.
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    I Can See Everything's Weaknesses
    Eastern · Langya Shu
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  • TYErannical
    TYErannical2yr
    Posted

    Story's written fairly well and the update stability is good too. My biggest gripe with this story is how boring it is. The main character is a walking automaton that feels nothing and does nothing. He simply is. He is a sociopath that easily adjusted to a cruel world. I wouldn't of felt this to be wrong if this was any other type of novel, but knowing this is a system novel, and that the MC doesn't have to work or strive for any of his power makes it worse. He's basically a pampered child who wouldn't help anybody out of a bad situation even though through out the entire novel he has been recieving incredible help. trash.

    altalt
    My Girlfriend From Turquoise Pond Requests My Help After My Millennium Seclusion
    Eastern · Red Pepper Afraid Of Spicy
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  • TYErannical
    TYErannical2yr
    Replied to TYErannical

    please ignore typos wrote this while tipsy

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    Magic Era: My Cells Can Evolve
    Fantasy · Foodie Ideas
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  • TYErannical
    TYErannical2yr
    Posted

    As more and more of these novels come out i can't help but notice the blatant unoriginallity of them all. I won't delve deeper in my criticisms for the writing, only leaving with the observation that it is very fast pace and bland. What i will however file my full complaint with is the TERRIBLE characters. For one they are not portrayed as humans, merely npcs that, after explaining something or merely being there to expunge some word count, dissapear and are rarely if ever characterized or brought up again. This lazy negative aspect is no better portrayed then when these novels describe the main character. Sloppily throwing out vague descriptions with no interesting details. You see it in every one of these novels, "he's hadsome". As if there wasn't any more apparent way of showing that you really didn't care and only wrote this to get a paycheck. Every character is a formulaic redundancy so predictable that i can accurately foretell what they're going to say. This is a grave novel sin. A novel is supposed to give its reader a sort of mystery, in that it reveals its content in unpredictable ways. keeping the readers attention and interest in tandem. You can't do this very well when every other story is a copy of every other story, it's like taking the same bus to work every day, after a while the trip becomes tedious. In conclusion this story isn't a bad story, fiver years ago.

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    Magic Era: My Cells Can Evolve
    Fantasy · Foodie Ideas
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  • TYErannical
    TYErannical2yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Ring

    Ch 1 Awakening
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    The World of Deities
    Fantasy · Fire of Eternity
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  • TYErannical
    TYErannical2yr
    Commented

    it's very hard to illicit any emotion when what you're reading is just a generalized sped through explanation of a story. i don't hate this novel, but i find it laughable when it tries to make you care for any characters. it would be better to not even have the flashback at all.

    Ch 97 A True Holy Knight
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    As A Cardinal, I Don't Do Overtime
    Fantasy · Southsky Star
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  • TYErannical
    TYErannical2yr
    Commented

    why are all MC'S handsome? i wouldn't even have an issue with it ifi didn't think it would be mentioned throughout the story several times

    Outside the school gate, a tall and handsome boy who was in a brand new school uniform looked at the banner and said.
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    Shocking: The Daughter of the Ancient God Is My Deskmate!
    Fantasy · Beibei Guffaw
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  • TYErannical
    TYErannical2yr
    Commented

    is this suppose to be a reporter

    "WTF! Doesn't that mean the archaeological team is in danger?"
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    I, Became a Gravekeeper of the Pyramid of Giza
    Horror · Bale Stafford
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  • TYErannical
    TYErannical2yr
    Commented

    weird sentence for an otherwise well written story thus far

    "WTF! Looks like this Great Pyramid of Giza is really mysterious. Could it be built by aliens?"
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    I, Became a Gravekeeper of the Pyramid of Giza
    Horror · Bale Stafford
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  • TYErannical
    TYErannical2yr
    Posted

    Does anybody even try these days? every novel on this site is a copy of other novels in its genre and worse yet with every new release the quality is going down.

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    The Sect is Trying Too Hard to Make a Good Showing. It Can Upgrade Itself Automatically
    Action · Everything is Joyous
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  • TYErannical
    TYErannical2yr
    Replied to Verlion

    it's really quite ironic in a frustrating way how a Chinese author would write about how their characters are being discriminated against because they're Chinese, but in another chapter they talk about different racist with blatant discrimitory and hateful passion.

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    Metal Evolution
    Sci-fi · Drifting Black Cat
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  • TYErannical
    TYErannical2yr
    Replied to MILARCH

    Im dark skinned too and sometimes i feel weird reading about a black MC

    altalt
    Metal Evolution
    Sci-fi · Drifting Black Cat
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  • TYErannical
    TYErannical2yr
    Posted

    I've only ever read one Chinese novel where a black person was characterized as being a normal person. Im not an SJW and im not going to assume the worst of the authors, but still why is every black person depicted in chinese novels either have to be a stereotype or a barbarian?

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    Metal Evolution
    Sci-fi · Drifting Black Cat
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  • TYErannical
    TYErannical2yr
    Posted

    An interesting premise with a bad follow up. The few chapters I've read has already allowed me to see the quality of the story. Its too fast paced, too farfetched, and the characters don't act like real people.

    This book has been deleted.
  • TYErannical
    TYErannical2yr
    Commented

    seems really unrealistic and fast paced

    This book has been deleted.
  • TYErannical
    TYErannical2yr
    Posted

    So far i really like it. The characters are good the MC is logical and easy to follow. so i don't get the hate this novel receives. I've seen worse written and overly nationalistic work get better rating then this.

    altalt
    I Teach Kendo in Tokyo
    Urban · Fanma Kato Megumi
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  • TYErannical
    TYErannical2yr
    Commented

    I was told that the 12 hour shifts would be over last week but it continued this week. Im in the military so this is mandatory for me. if everything goes well this Thursday will be the last 12 hour shift. I'll regain posting either Friday or Saturday.

    Ch 24 Ch 23 Taking action
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    The World I Created
    Fantasy · TYErannical
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