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I’m not sure if it’s the author or the translator but it’s not very consistent. At one point it says that rank 5s are the strongest and there are no rank 6 magisters. Later it’s said that there are rank 6s and even higher ranks too. At another point they use the term magic cores. A few sentences later they say monster cores. Then it goes back to magic cores. The charcter’s names change too. At one point it’s Hill and then the next it’s Hila. It’s pretty early on so I can’t say much about the story so far. The consistency of the characters so far though is not great. The main character pulls and holds a beautiful examiner’s waist after they saw each other for a total of a few minutes. I believe it was also their first time actually talking and she was still fine with it. Later when he is having dinner with this woman he slaps a rich guy because he insulted weak magisters. The guy wasn’t even talking to him. Honestly this just looks like the author trying to forcefully create drama. The world building seems pretty generic with not much of it explored yet. Overall I’d say it’s okay to pass the time with. It’s still pretty early so it may get better later.

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