Reviews of Irene The Lady Who Turned Down Fate
Irene The Lady Who Turned Down Fate
MayDreamer
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This is an intriguing book to read I admire the way the characters are brought to existence Nice writing style and story idea Thumbs up to the author
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I very much enjoyed the story, Author! The book was beautifully written with enough descriptions to portray the main character's emotions and the world she was suddenly thrown in. I really like Lily's/ Irene's personality that I could somehow relate to, hehe. Having a life too normal that it somehow felt too boring to live on. Like, I also want to be thrown into a magical world, meet my prince charming, and rule the world with an op buff. Alas, it was nothing but a wishful thinking of mine :) Anyway, Good job Author and thank you for bringing us this wonderful story ;)
This is a good book! I would recommend to readers who are into fantasy romance with the whole package of Prince, Incarnation, etc... I hope hmtgis time FL gets the chance to change her path for the better. Keep up with the good work, I've added it to my library so I can read future chapters.....[img=recommend]
The storyline is awesome. The way how Lily tried to prevent every bad incident as Irene is explained perfectly. A balance between the past and present is also maintained, while describing every incident. The characters and the environment are portrayed well too. Anyone, who likes time travel type of stories, will love this novel. Keep Going Author!!
Ok I think you asked for a genuine review, so just a full heads up that there isn't much sugarcoating here. First, I just wanted to say that congrats for writing your first original work! The attempt is definitely there, and I just wanted to say good luck first and foremost. Also, really really sorry for the late review. I tried to take the time to read each chapter a bit more carefully before leaving this review. Writing Quality (3/5): I think this was my main deduction for this novel. I had to read a few sentences a few times, and the frequent grammatical errors and spelling and even punctuation errors sometimes were a bit distracting. However, please please take this with a grain of salt (or maybe even a bucket of salt). I'm just really picky about how books are written, and I usually just dock another point for frequent spelling/punctuation mistakes because they can be pretty easily fixed with another look at the chapter. That being said, I think the general pacing of the story was a bit confusing for me. There was a lot of information being presented all at once sometimes, but at other times, the pacing would be relatively slice of life. Updates (5/5): You got this :D You're honestly really hardworking, and I just wanted to say great job so far!!! Story Development (4/5): I must admit that this plot was a bit tropey. I think there wasn't anything in particular that stood out to me other than the reverse harem part, but I also just personally am not a super big fan of them (so might just be me). Once again, I just thought that there were some sections with a ton of information and some others without much being presented. Character Design (5/5): I love Ashton. Honestly enough said. World Background (5/5): There wasn't anything in particular that stood out for the world background, but I could tell that you had invested thought into making it! All in all, good luck with the rest of the story! It was a really enjoyable read.
The way you wrote the first chapter was amazing. I could feel the warmth of the words. The story feels fresh for me since is the first reverse harem I'm reading. I really feel immersed in the story, so I added it to my collection. I thought I could never read something like a reverse harem, but you proved me wrong, keep up the good work author!
Okay so um I like the idea of the story, it's pretty creative. The characters are pretty well-written. Overall, I'd say that the book is great, probably because I'm biased cuz I'm a sucker for reincarnation stories. However, there are a few things that the author must consider: Given that this is your first novel, it's pretty great. Definitely could use some edits here and there, but nothing that can't be resolved by proofreading. The situation setting is described beautifully but there are places where it's awkward (?) Perhaps it's due to over-explaining it, I'm not really sure. Conversations sometimes feel stunted, as if it's something that they wouldn't say in that situation (?) It doesn't disrupt the flow of the story, but it's sort of annoying sometimes. [I'm so sorry author T-T] Anyways, I hope you take my words with a grain of salt and use it further improve your writing skills. Let's all learn from our mistakes and become the next Rick Riordan :> !! Great work author, keep it up!!
I am a big fan of these types of novels so it is not very hard to make me give it a go. So here are my thoughts: The flow is nice and easy to follow, the characters are fleshed out and the chapter updates are stable. By the way it’s nice that you made Lilly someone who loves to read light novels, as it helps the readers feel a sense of closeness and familiarity. The only thing I can say that is a bit lacking, but just a teeny tiny bit is what seemed to me a bit awkwardly constructed phrases, they are few and don’t distort the meaning, but I just wanted to point that out. I am enjoying the story so far, so I hope you keep up the good work and since this is your first project as you said, I have no doubt that it’s only going to get better as you add to your experience. Over all, this is certainly something I can recommend. Still going to give it five stars even though it probably merits more like 4.7 in my view, just because I know how much of an energy boost it can give the author to work harder. May the gods of imaginations and storytelling bless you with their favor young author.
It's not the kind of story that I usually read, but I did find it interesting enough. It truly is a very lovable story, particularly because of the dynamics between the MC and her family. What I loved the most was the little brother... Trust me, you'll love him too! I think some proof reading will benefit this story a lot and make it even better. Nice work, author!
There is a wide variety of English which is used by the author, its refreshing to see on Webnovel. But, the read didn't excite me and there was no flow due to the writing and storyline being choppy and incomplete; there is a lack of smooth transition between events, this makes it hard to read. There are some grammar, punctuation and spelling mistakes which can be easily be cleared up, the author would just need to have a re-read. I know this a fresh attempt for the author, so all I can say is keep going! Take feedback from your readers, and it is okay if they think different from your vision, its your story. Well done :)
I like the story, it sounds quite fun. Not entirely my style, but giving new types of stories a go is important, I guess. The only problem I had, and I didn't read to far into it, is essentially the writing quality itself (hence I gave it a 3). There's a lot of grammatical errors, as well as misspelling, even as basic as 'there' instead of 'their'. I'd like you to double check, OP. Everything else was fine, but I feel like it's a bit too much like 'My next life as a Villainess'. Everyone needs inspiration, so I don't think that's a problem. Other than that, Good Job.
