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Jonkohrr

Jonkohrr

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Author of The Enigma of the V. I'm on Wattpad with the same name. If you like anything you read let me know, alright?

2020-09-05 JoinedPanama
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  • Jonkohrr
    Jonkohrr4mth
    Replied to Ilonka_Torres

    Gracias por leer, Ilonka!

    Ch 1 We're not in Kansas anymore...
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  • Jonkohrr
    Jonkohrr1yr
    Replied to BlueRobin377

    This is now a complete story :)

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  • Jonkohrr
    Jonkohrr1yr
    Replied to AxlSLL

    The narrator only speaks in the third person now. It's been a long time editing plus finishing the story, but MANY things have been corrected. I'm still editing it to this day, though.

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  • Jonkohrr
    Jonkohrr1yr
    Replied to RogerKaos

    You did too?

    Child: OK.
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  • Jonkohrr
    Jonkohrr1yr
    Commented

    This was enjoyable ☺️

    Ch 2 LEXINE WOODS
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  • Jonkohrr
    Jonkohrr1yr
    Commented
    Walking up the steps to their two bedroomed apartment, the distinct smell of chocolate cookies wafted through the air. Lexine's stomach rumbled. She could not quite remember her last meal. The previous morning perhaps? To fit into the pair of jeans Ceeret had picked out for her, she had not eaten. That was also probably the reason why she got drunk so quickly the night before. 'I am never going to drink again.' She promised herself.
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  • Jonkohrr
    Jonkohrr1yr
    Commented

    Sure, trust the stranger giving you pills at a party ... What could go wrong?

    She quirked a brow at him and he nodded his head gesturing to hers before speaking in a slight British accent, "For your hangover." He placed them in her palm together with the bottle of water he had in his other hand.
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  • Jonkohrr
    Jonkohrr1yr
    Commented

    Ouch!

    When the moon reached its highest position, the man's body began to shake. As if possessed, his body bent backward and a large crack filled the surrounding area. The man bit his lip, to prevent himself from screaming out in pain. His left arm was next to break. The fingers cracked backward, then it bent at the elbow and at the shoulder.
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  • Jonkohrr
    Jonkohrr1yr
    Commented

    That cliffhanger though...

    Ch 8 Tales of the Old - Part III
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  • Jonkohrr
    Jonkohrr1yr
    Commented

    Vance has zero patience for the poor writer, lol.

    Ch 7 Tales Of The Old - Part II
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  • Jonkohrr
    Jonkohrr1yr
    Commented

    Reminds me of the classes available in the MMORPG Perfect World International

    Time passed, again. People came to accept the existence of someone else stronger than them. With time, the identities of others were also revealed - they were Elves, Barbarians, Monsters, and many others.
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  • Jonkohrr
    Jonkohrr1yr
    Replied to DNaCat_R

    I believe it's only missing the word "someone"

    "I need to get strong to keep myself from all these bad people if I want to roam the world unhindered. Father was right. What if I went to the city alone and robbed or killed me?''
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  • Jonkohrr
    Jonkohrr1yr
    Commented

    Reina... It means "queen". It's such a beautiful name...

    It all started when Enes, King of the Kingdom of Ilios, attacked the nearby Raegia Kingdom, enraptured by Princess Reina, to try and capture her for himself.
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  • Jonkohrr
    Jonkohrr1yr
    Replied to Rathowm

    I appreciate the encouraging words.

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  • Jonkohrr
    Jonkohrr1yr
    Commented

    I'm starting to get attached to the characters... I have a feeling that I will probably be heartbroken soon because of it.

    Ch 6 Tales Of The Old - Part I
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  • Jonkohrr
    Jonkohrr1yr
    Commented

    Something tells me that this promise won't age well ...

    "Hahaha," Morgan laughed, seeing his son's serious expression. He slowly bent down on his knees embracing Vance and said "Okay. Promise." He was smiling, yet it was not a smile.
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  • Jonkohrr
    Jonkohrr1yr
    Commented

    That was quite a trip. Like Vance I'm left wondering what does it all mean...

    Ch 5 Confrontation With The Self
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  • Jonkohrr
    Jonkohrr1yr
    Replied to WandererMonk

    Thank you for your comment. I basically finished the story a couple days ago and am just uploading the remaining chapters daily. I hope continue to enjoy it!

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  • Jonkohrr
    Jonkohrr1yr
    Commented

    Hey, author, not rushing you or anything, but I hope you plan on continuing the story. Great work!

    Ch 4 Baby Steps
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  • Jonkohrr
    Jonkohrr1yr
    Commented

    Intriguing ...

    Ch 4 Baby Steps
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