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North Korea is nothing like the Scandinavian countries. I don't think you can compare socialism with them.
I'm in the learning phase, so I highly appreciate every piece of criticism my story gets.
Noted. Thanks for the comments, i will sit down to change and edit the story at one point, and your comments are very helpful. Thanks đ
yes, vit and int determines how much you have, not levels
Not sure what you mean?
Should be said that the deadlock wasn't meant to be going on for minutes and only a few seconds. He go out of it since he could feel him losing the fight. Could have been explained better, and thanks I will take notes of every comment and improve the story :)
I have compressed the different windows so not to have it fill everything. And when he looked at the skill before, it was the skills detail window, its where the info of the skill is.
The story got more developed as i wrote it, and this is one of the things i changed. My story will get an major update when i have enough material, but as it is now small errors will persists through the story.
its not romance tagged so don't expect it
I usually avoid these types of stories, but when started reading it, I couldn't stop. First of all, the grammar, punctuations, etc are on point. (I'm not native, so I might not be the best judge). But overall was it a smooth read. Second, the story and characters are well written and you really get sucked into the world the author made. Though, sometimes I lost a bit of interest in the world and characters when I read it. But that might be because it's not my kind of genre. I would recommend reading it :)
Oh no where's the blep God