Review Detail of Jonkohrr in Irene The Lady Who Turned Down Fate

It's not the kind of story that I usually read, but I did find it interesting enough. It truly is a very lovable story, particularly because of the dynamics between the MC and her family. What I loved the most was the little brother... Trust me, you'll love him too! I think some proof reading will benefit this story a lot and make it even better. Nice work, author!