Reviews of Into the Zombie World

I love this novel over all and will keep reading for aslong as you release new chaps. Also glad you upload frequently. The world and character are great and interesting. The idea of seeing him improve as a person and possibly along with the system is very nice. The spelling and grammar could definitely be improved upon and I know you’re currently working on said aspect. As you and your novel improve over time I’ll be sure to raise my review to a higher star! I am currently at around chapter 20 so I’ll look forwards to the improvements in the future chapters. Thankyou author and keep up with the amazing content!

Writing Quality: its garbage, the grammar is horrendous and really hard to read, im sorry but i cant keep doing this to myself im losing too much neurons and that's pretty fucking bad. I'm pretty sure if i were to look at the latest updates i would still notice the same mistakes so i'm not gonna waste my time doing it. Stability of Updates:5 star, mostly cuz the author approaches writing his novel with "quantity over quality" meaning he wont improve. Story development: I'll make this clear, the story would be good, if the goddamn grammar would be decent at least, which would make it easier for people to understand what the author wants to convey trough his sentences, but sadly since the grammar is bad you will, and im telling you now, always get out of the mood when reading this, you will feel like you get into it then one sentence makes you distracted and just fucking annoyed. Character Design: Simple 2d people. barely any feeling i get that they are real people, its just feels like im reading cardboard boxes interact with each other. the main character is weird, i cant grasp what kinda person he is. he is determined and in the next moment he loses all his nuts from only looking at a zombie. World Background: 3 star, not bad, but you tend to give too much exposition for no reason other than just reminding people that "will" is "will" and "will" is always gonna be "will" we get it, you dont need to spam 3 to 5 chapters telling us how important and stupid of a concept "will" is. over all 3 stars, i wouldn't want to read this anymore, maybe if it had an author who actually studies english and doesn't **** up even the most basic of rules in english writing, i would probably enjoy the chapters. im not a native english speaker or writer, im just a dood who can see the flow of sentences and paragraphs. Good luck whoever reads this, the first few chapters were well edited, maybe a bit rough but i could enjoy the story without noticing that someone messed up the sentences with "he come closed to zombie what stay 5 feet from Neil" lol its just an example but i hope you had fun reading that sentence. that's how it feel reading the novel after chapter 10 or 15

I've read 25 chapters so far so I can't speak for anything that happens later! So far the novel is not bad, but it doesn't catch me either. In the first 12 chapters is a lot of info about the world building etc. which is quite tiresome to read, so I think you can lose a lot of readers in those first chapters. And even in the remaining chapters I read, the writing was a little too detailed(for my taste) which took the tension out of the fight's. ! SPOILER: Also I think the system is quite good and a little different than the ones in other novels but in my opinion the price for something like weapon mastery is a little low, since the other weapon skills like kinfe mastery(20p) make no sense at all if you can master literally every object as a weapon for 60p... This are just my thoughts after the few chapters I've read so far and I'm only trying to help, this is not supposed to be me ranting about how bad the novel is, because I do not think that at all :)

I like this book and I do recommend it.I have already read a good part of it to say this.👍👍👍👍👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

The grammar was decent but I can see some typos here and there though it doesn't disturbs my reading apparently. I would like to suggest to the author to read more english novels that was published by american authors. I know that it was hard to narrate english because it was not our mother tongue, but let's improve ourselves by more reading. Writing quality was decent and story development was nice and steady. The character design was neat and he was likable in any sense. Updating stability was steady and world background was detailed. Over all, nice creativity. As a fellow countrymen, I hope we all improve as the time goes by as an author. Hope you check out my book" Waking up in the undead world" and leave a review.

it is a nice story with decent progression and the story concept is promising. The only thing that throws me off is the names of some of the cities, but I guess that the author took inspiration from the country that they live in so it is not big deal.

Such a rare novel, zombie novels are damn rare now. as a fan 0f Zombies, I can say only say that your novel is good and rare too... well, keep up the good work, I love the novel ey

it was good at the start but the author make it more complicated when he used other languages instead of just using standard english, it also doesn't flow smoothly when combining the two language. after he used other language he lost a lot of reader

I would have to say that the synopsis is rather bad. Usually the syn depends whether i read a story or not, if it’s hard to understand doesn’t explain the story very well i won’t read it. I believe you should rewrite the Syn because let’s be honest the syn is what brings the readers in. It’s supposed to make them be like “Oh, This looks interesting” basically what i am saying is “Better Synopsis = More readers”

This story is a great story and i could almost see no flaws in it over all i loved every second i read it also i hope this author could release mire of it cause its great

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Interesting take on the concept of transmigration and systems by using a zombie apocalypse as the setting. The chapters are all well written. You get a clear sense of what's going on all the time and what the world around you looks like. My only issue is that I wish there would be more characters so we could have more dialogue, but I assume this gets solved in future chapters. The chapters are a tad short so it took a bit to get used to the pacing, but nothing major overall. If you like zombie survival stories and wanna see it being done with isekai elements, give this a shot!

Although the concept of the isekai and golden finger trope have been overused in Japanese and Chinese web novels. It's nice to see a Western take on the genres by combining the two together along with the zombie apocalypse. The novel had many thriller elements and is very fast paced, making it easy for readers to get invested. The actions scenes and the descriptions of the backgrounds are quite nice as well.

The story is original, and I love the way the author portrays the thoughts. The way the plot unfolds, is very exhilarating and full of suspense. This is a must read book, it's already one of my favorites. Good story, good plot good stuff.

This is actually pretty interesting and the grammar is mostly satisfactory. I didn't have problems reading this and it was very intriguing. Such a great read.

I love the idea of this whole zombie thing. It's a unique concept. The plotline seems to have an interesting twist to it as far as I can tell. Great world-building and captivating descriptive. This is such a fun read, overall!

This is my first time reading a novel which is related to zombies. I started reading bout of curiosity but got instantly hooked. There were nothing much dilly-dallying about how he dies and the story starts immediately making me feel elated. I Know author sometimes it can be tiring to write. I am here to give you lots of motivation and encouragement. Do give this novel a try. I am sure you all will also love it.

So here it is!! A good piece of work. The author is doing a great work Go and start reading If you're a curious cat, you're going to love it more!

A very descriptive story about a zombie apocalypse !!! The author does a splendid job of describing the environment, MC, Zombies and the world. Keep it up!!! and write more chapter.

Wow. I like the story. It gives me chills and surprises! I like the writing quality of the author. The author seems to have an eye on every detail and I only saw minor errors but it was quickly covered by the powerful story. Well done, Author-sama!!