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Axes
AxesLv53yrAxes

I would have to say that the synopsis is rather bad. Usually the syn depends whether i read a story or not, if it’s hard to understand doesn’t explain the story very well i won’t read it. I believe you should rewrite the Syn because let’s be honest the syn is what brings the readers in. It’s supposed to make them be like “Oh, This looks interesting” basically what i am saying is “Better Synopsis = More readers”

Into the Zombie World

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alright thank you!

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Neil_AdsAuthorNeil_Ads

I've change it, could you please look it up again?

Axes
AxesLv5Axes

That Is much better! The first one made me tear up lol! I think more people will give it a try now. Since it’s easier to understand.

Neil_Ads:I've change it, could you please look it up again?