I love this novel over all and will keep reading for aslong as you release new chaps. Also glad you upload frequently. The world and character are great and interesting. The idea of seeing him improve as a person and possibly along with the system is very nice. The spelling and grammar could definitely be improved upon and I know you’re currently working on said aspect. As you and your novel improve over time I’ll be sure to raise my review to a higher star! I am currently at around chapter 20 so I’ll look forwards to the improvements in the future chapters. Thankyou author and keep up with the amazing content!
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