Review Detail of Vladarius in Into the Zombie World

Writing Quality: its garbage, the grammar is horrendous and really hard to read, im sorry but i cant keep doing this to myself im losing too much neurons and that's pretty fucking bad. I'm pretty sure if i were to look at the latest updates i would still notice the same mistakes so i'm not gonna waste my time doing it. Stability of Updates:5 star, mostly cuz the author approaches writing his novel with "quantity over quality" meaning he wont improve. Story development: I'll make this clear, the story would be good, if the goddamn grammar would be decent at least, which would make it easier for people to understand what the author wants to convey trough his sentences, but sadly since the grammar is bad you will, and im telling you now, always get out of the mood when reading this, you will feel like you get into it then one sentence makes you distracted and just fucking annoyed. Character Design: Simple 2d people. barely any feeling i get that they are real people, its just feels like im reading cardboard boxes interact with each other. the main character is weird, i cant grasp what kinda person he is. he is determined and in the next moment he loses all his nuts from only looking at a zombie. World Background: 3 star, not bad, but you tend to give too much exposition for no reason other than just reminding people that "will" is "will" and "will" is always gonna be "will" we get it, you dont need to spam 3 to 5 chapters telling us how important and stupid of a concept "will" is. over all 3 stars, i wouldn't want to read this anymore, maybe if it had an author who actually studies english and doesn't **** up even the most basic of rules in english writing, i would probably enjoy the chapters. im not a native english speaker or writer, im just a dood who can see the flow of sentences and paragraphs. Good luck whoever reads this, the first few chapters were well edited, maybe a bit rough but i could enjoy the story without noticing that someone messed up the sentences with "he come closed to zombie what stay 5 feet from Neil" lol its just an example but i hope you had fun reading that sentence. that's how it feel reading the novel after chapter 10 or 15