Reviews of Harry Potter: Dimensional Wizard
Harry Potter: Dimensional Wizard
LazySageDao
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I think this fan-fic is like wuxia fan fic because the personality of the mc is like a hero of wuxia or xianxia but with some common sense and I have seen many Chinese fan-fic where are some of the things that You showed how future ideas of the mc or possible futures or yugioh or that I be a teacher instead of a student and so, only that you have done a very nice time skip and I feel that in 300 chapters you will make me feel more satisfied than watching 900 or 1500 of how are the 7 years of harry potter plus some extra plot
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I have to say that this is not one of the greatest but The Greatest Novel I've ever read and I've read thousands.Personally, I dont really like Harems,Ai that isn't just a robotic personality, Kingdom building,multiversal travel etc,... since most novels that incorporate them suck yet in this novel they all work together soo perfectly.Moreover,there is great character development for all characters and there mix between comedy and seriousness which doesn't feel forced but works together perfectly.Usually, when I read novels there are alot of changes that I would make to make the novel better or more coherent in my opinion but in this there are no major changes that I would make perhaps only minor changes but even if they weren't it'd still be a perfect novel.I especially appreciate all the time and effort it took you to make this Masterpiece and I also appreciate you always asking the readers their opinions on how the story should but also not trying to incorporate all the suggestion but only the suggestions that work in the story.since I've seen it many times when authors try to incorporate too may opinions that end ruining the whole story.I hope you continue this story for a long time since it has soooo much potential and till now in my opinion its perfect.I wish you all the best đš
It's a good fic but I warn anyone who love James Potter in Hp, I seriously don't understand why the author hate him so much.. I will tell you what happen to him, I'll try to not tell you too much spoilers.Basically it goes like this, Lily Potter (Mother of Harry Potter) get revive by Mc, James Potter (Her husband) didn't get revive with her because Snape told Mc not to revive him.Snape and Lily fall in love after some time because she see how much Snape loves her, and she spaned alot of time with him.. then she and Harry finally can revive James but he see that Snape and his wife are toghter soo he dosen't like that but Lily get mad at him and ask him 'Were have he been all this time?' (Dead)..She and Snape want to marry, she finally remember she have a husband and go tell him that she and Snape want to marry, he get angry, Harry (Lily and James Son), is with his Mother and ask James 'Were he had been all his Childhood, and that Snape was more of a father to him', and that's all I remember..I currently re-reading this fic so I don't really remember what had happen but I remember this because I wanted to drop cuz of this but I didn't cuz I didnt really knew who James was in Hp..Author really did dirty to him, and I want to ask hin why?, because this is seriously one of the worst thing of this fic..All in all, a great fic, this is the only thing that is bad about it, can anyone tell me if James Potter deserves what had happen to him, and what kind of man he is in Hp, please!?!
If you're looking for a good harem story with meaningful relationships, this fanfic is not for you. I'm going to list the bad points and the good ones to make this easier for you. Good points: Has great variety, lots of characters, and a rich world. Good world-building, but if you don't pay attention, you might forget certain details. The MC is overpowered, but not the most powerful being out there, and sometimes he finds himself in troublesome situations. Amazing magic - this fic goes overboard with magic research and systems, but in a good way. Bad points: Romance is almost non-existent. If you're looking for a harem with good romance, look elsewhere. I can't even remember how many wives he has; I only know that three of them are somewhat relevant, and the other two are rarely mentioned. The MC wants to protect his loved ones, but he literally spent more than 50 years without them because he wanted to explore worlds and research. Completely forgettable characters, especially because the author expects us to already know the fictional world that the MC goes to. Mate, you have to explain the new world to us. This is an HP fanfic, and we only need to know about HP. Lack of character development, including the MC. Even after 352 chapters, the MC remains mostly unchanged. Basically, that's it. If you're into magic systems, this is for you. But if you like interpersonal relationships... just save yourself from the annoyance.
I just start reading it a week ago ,but Lily's choice snape.This i cannot understand because a woman can forgive anything done against her but she will never forgive any type of cruelty done against her child specially something like almost eleven years of physical and mental abuse.Snape is one of the reasons of that abuse.you are talking about a romantic relationship, how can she even call him a friend. i can understand a professional relationship because they have to work together because they are part of a group but romantic relationship is very far fetched even for a fan fiction.
This novel is probably the best HP fanfic ever. The magic research alone kills me, the plot is nice and well planned, Mc becomes an emperor and it doesn't get boring. The only problem I have with it is that there are no 18+ scenes but all in all this is the best, I hope Author continues with his Good work and MAY THE LORD BLESS HIS SOUL. Thank you.
I think this is decent almost good BUT 1st i can't quite bring myself to care to the point i didn't even remember the beginning of the fanfic and i had to go back and re-read which didn't do anything since again i couldn't bring myself to care 2st in the beginning we see our MC recounting his times with his family his life in hogwarts essentially a flashback so that we can get a sense of his character while it tries to do so it fails miserably -WHY? Because it's detached and even from the beginning i can't bring myself to care about the lives of the characters or how the MC builds the wet dream of Emperor Of Mankind (Arcane Empire) while i can see where this is coming it seems more like a novel that is heavily invested in kingdom building that it's neglects its own protagonist -3rd Antagonist **SPOILERS** In the fanfic there seems to be a great war that is about to erupt/erupted and our MC happens to be in the middle of it mentored by Merlin The Mage himself but it's mentored in the loosest terms possible because he doesn't really interfere or teach anything to him other than giving knowledge when necessary this is where we first take a peek at the war or what is coming of it but it never truly comes because the Author is busy shooting it's own character in the foot -4th Slow Plot Author at every point and turn makes it a hassle for our MC to progress for an inch and while the detail that goes into is admirable it also gives him a lot of emotional baggage most of the things he accompliches are done by himself anyway and with the empire/his lovers/herpo the foul The plot just gets strecht out so far that it becomes tedious to read and every roadblock you put infront of our MCs face is not helping 5-Weird Character Writing I think that characters are in a limbo of being fleshed out and just glossed over for example snape/lily/rowena There is a lot of different characters that are capable of many different things but they are just glossed over for example the main character has a great harem a very big one but despite marrying them for their uniqueness or their charms or simply that they were favored by fates they become nothing more than throphies to show around every few hundred chapters nothing less
Author let me tell you that this is one of the first fanfiction that I really wish it would not be abandoned, the mc is not out of nowhere the process is explained and it is implied that it cares about human relationships it is not a robot that what it does is as a program. I am very grateful that he is reading one of the best fanfiction.
There are only two types of fanfications, utter garbage and those that are amazing. This one is the later. It took all I liked about infinity genra and complex magic systems, splicing them together. Even if you dislike HP verse than you will still love this as it is not just one of those trashy fanfiction where mc just follows Harry around like some fangirl. Instead the world becomes so changed that it turns into its own and unique one.
