Review Detail of Erubey in Harry Potter: Dimensional Wizard

I think this is decent almost good BUT 1st i can't quite bring myself to care to the point i didn't even remember the beginning of the fanfic and i had to go back and re-read which didn't do anything since again i couldn't bring myself to care 2st in the beginning we see our MC recounting his times with his family his life in hogwarts essentially a flashback so that we can get a sense of his character while it tries to do so it fails miserably -WHY? Because it's detached and even from the beginning i can't bring myself to care about the lives of the characters or how the MC builds the wet dream of Emperor Of Mankind (Arcane Empire) while i can see where this is coming it seems more like a novel that is heavily invested in kingdom building that it's neglects its own protagonist -3rd Antagonist **SPOILERS** In the fanfic there seems to be a great war that is about to erupt/erupted and our MC happens to be in the middle of it mentored by Merlin The Mage himself but it's mentored in the loosest terms possible because he doesn't really interfere or teach anything to him other than giving knowledge when necessary this is where we first take a peek at the war or what is coming of it but it never truly comes because the Author is busy shooting it's own character in the foot -4th Slow Plot Author at every point and turn makes it a hassle for our MC to progress for an inch and while the detail that goes into is admirable it also gives him a lot of emotional baggage most of the things he accompliches are done by himself anyway and with the empire/his lovers/herpo the foul The plot just gets strecht out so far that it becomes tedious to read and every roadblock you put infront of our MCs face is not helping 5-Weird Character Writing I think that characters are in a limbo of being fleshed out and just glossed over for example snape/lily/rowena There is a lot of different characters that are capable of many different things but they are just glossed over for example the main character has a great harem a very big one but despite marrying them for their uniqueness or their charms or simply that they were favored by fates they become nothing more than throphies to show around every few hundred chapters nothing less