thank you author wish you the best

i don't mean to be hurtful but this chapter was more interesting than the rest maybe you should suggest on personal relationships a bit more? especially on aphrodite i'm not sure if i like how fast it developed but the differences between them and despite this both being able to connect is spectacular

it's not strange that this happened snape was only interested in lily because she was the only one remotely nice to him even if its for a little i suggest taking her out as a romantic interests there are better waifus

it's blatant you are using chatgpt

i read this for quite a bit from the MTL translations honestly it's not that bad but author purposefully lowered the intelligence of the MC to keep the novel going so its filled with filler chapters and a story that doesn't go anywhere but only run in a circle if you have the patience of a saint you should try it

why does he get only get fate stuff from gacha

lucifer

believe in yourself you are awesome and having a second job does not seem like a bad idea

it's going to be really disappointing when she ends up with leah eventually

TÜRKIYEEEE ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

well yeah you can have named characters but this guy is going to be fighting with the way things are going planetary or even intergalactic wars hell you might even implement virus gaining hivemind like capabilities and have them act like tyranids my point is at some point he'll need grunt soldiers and cloning seems very fit for it

you could just explain it as nanomachines making him stronger etc like that nano machine novel and about the SAS 4 universe, you don't have to actually have the whole universe and its command structure be obedient to the system after all system is just themed in SAS 4 but the actual system is a whole another thing, SO you could just have him unlock i dunno some kind of cloning tech and disguise it as conscription or recruiting just give them the same armor and guns badumm you have SAS soldiers on standby

the system itself has the capability to do so, you could just make it so that he can't arm/recruit/buy conscripts is because he doesn't have a high enough rank plus you already made consessions with him giving him the flawless progenitor serum instead you could have naturally boosted his physique and constitution with each rank up and you already hinted at a higher command structure existing that saved the main character from being kidnapped

it's really good, but honestly? i expected the themes to lean more heavily on the ranks and SAS4 military, this one seems to lean more towards kingdom building and politics, i want this guy to get general rank and participate in planetary wars.

"You are not real, you are made out of moonlight..."

main character seems very bland, dialogues too most of them sound pretty amateurish not a really big deal, the biggest bummer to me was the MC having nothing to do with bloodborne and hunting besides having hunter attire, plot also seems not very interesting, could use a bit of spice.

i genuinely see no reason for why should hades associate himself with greek pantheon there are many more that are far more interesting

You are a cool dude don't let people/life put you down, do what you gotta do man much love!

I love your work.

Sad, still no hannibal template.