Being mature doesn't mean allowing people to step all over you with a smile on your face. Obsessing over revenge is bad, but allowing people to think that they can treat you like trash to the point where you almost died isn't mature, it's pushover weakling behavior. Especially for someone who is set to be the lord of his house. I guess I'm just upset because he has no ruthlesness, no sharp edge to him. It's like he doesn't attribute any value to the torture he suffered and the betrayal of his family. People aren't like that, at least unbroken ones who are mentally whole. Unlike what schools and pop culture will say, revenge isn't evil, nor will it turn you into a bad guy. It's necessary for one's mental wellbeing to fight back against those who wronged them, lest they become a weakling who let others use them as a doormat.

I agree none of those women are really wide material. Ino especially. Honestly if I was a ninja, I probably would find a civilian wife that has a decent amount of latent Chakra so my kids aren't weak. Kunoichi are taught to use their bodies to manipulate men and that's just not something that is conducive to being a wife.

Bro please don't make your main character a simp, especially not for someone like ino yamanaka.

Mc has a terrible mentality for the world he lives in. He just let an out of control kyuubified Naruto rail on him for the sake of relieving his anger. He has no idea what will happen and believes that Naruto won't accidentally kill him because "Canon". That's not something anyone with a lick of sense or survival instinct would do. To me he seems very immature, like he wasn't reincarnated at all.

Not having a lot of chakra is basically a death sentence to his ambition to be powerful. I hope he solves that issue quickly.

Kakashi doesn't have very little chakra. IDK where you heard that but not only is he the son of an s rank Shinobi, he was labeled as a genius and could use the raikiri before he was 10. Just because he can't compare to people like Naruto and Sasuke doesn't mean he doesn't have a lot of chakra. most people forget, but the average Jonin is like asuma sarutobi. In the big picture most Jonin are basically bugs crawling on the ground.

Bro am iIreading a novel about ninja villages in an eternal struggle for dominance or Chinese cultivation sects showing off their younger generation at a tournament? Ninjas wouldn't show off for no reason like this.

It would be really really awesome if he could 1: Make a Subspace Storage Artifact 2: Infuse his sword with the goro goro no mi to add the lighting and dematerialization to the destruction energy in the sword, this making a mix between Zeus thunderbolt and power of destruction 3:Create some sort of mythical zoan familiar that can fly 4: Make a wedding ring set with the Bind Bind fruit that binds him and his wives together and also let's him know their condition 5: Make a "healing zone" on his ship when he gets one by making a healing artifact with the heal heal fruit 6: Make an artifact with the soul soul fruit after killing big mom that allows him to bind objects to his soul, this would allow his sword to become a spirit weapon I'm sure there's many more but those are the ones I can think of off the top of my head.

That was intentional. I'm pretty sure that non main family senju integrated with the civilian population of Konoha.

Yeah if I remember right he was a scientist? Definitely a savant who never went outside a day in his life with the way he acts.

Ugh isn't he like way too cordial with them. IDK if author remembers but i asked you about this when you first started writing and you swore up and down that this wouldn't happen and that you would never have him forgiving them and now he seems to be cordial with them. I honestly don't get why he's being so nice but I'm already this far in to the novel iIfeel like I should see it to the end.

Considering that Itachi hasn't killed the uchiha clan yet, Sasuke is 6. You're telling me that Sasuke is as strong as a chuunin at 6 years old? Get real man. Next you're going to be telling us that Hinata has the tenseigan and is secretly stronger than the hokage and that Shikamaru is hardworking or that Choji is skinny. At this point just make up an OC and say that he's a century genius if you want someone to compete with the MC because making a 6 year old Sasuke as strong as a chuunin is a total plot breaker.

Bro you don't use a sword in taijutsu. It literally means body technique. There are no weapons involved in a taijutsu match.

The translation is good and the idea is good. But the MC is a lazy, stupid, thoughtless and useless person. He has all these awesome inherent powers and despite being a reincarnated person who knows the dangers of the world, he doesn't train, doesn't try to develop his abilities and basically just constantly takes L's and then he's like "No wonder I lost, it was the first time I've used this ability despite having it for 350 years". Like c'mon, even someone who is super dense would understand the necessity of being strong in the world he's in and he just loafs around playing human mortal. It's unfortunate. But the translation is pretty decent so nice job on that.

Lol it's even worse because he's a reincarnator. he knows the future dangers and he hasn't trained his abilities, like at all. The frustration iIget from reading this is honestly too much.

Suddenly? He has never made good decisions.

I can vaguely get the main idea that this is a father in law NTR story. But beyond that the translation is so bad that it's impossible to read. Believe me, I've read some pretty bad translations. I read almost all of martial peak in MTL and many of the translated fics I start on here I finish in MTL. This is by far the worst translations I've read tho.

Yeah I agree. So far author has been trying to create the setting for the start of the story via infodump, but honestly most of what has been said can be summed up to "All of the adventures I've had, the dangers and troubles I've been through and the relationships I've formed are manipulations by an old, bored man who thinks he knows better than everyone else" BAM add a few details and there you go. My recommendation for the author is to condense all the chapters until this one into one or two chapters and to add some emotion to it. it's very dry reading. no one could recount that their whole life has been a lie the same way they would recount words from a dictionary. I read all those chapters but iIfeel like I could have read the first chapter and read this one and I wouldn't have actually missed anything.

??? So if it came down to you and some mook you don't know, you would lay down and die so that you don't have the sin of killing an innocent person? If what you say is true then Luke should be considered just as evil as Darth Vader. IDK about you but if iIor my family are in danger and all I have to do is blow up a ship with a couple of people who aren't involved to ensure my life and my families life I will do that in a heartbeat and without much guilt. I'm unwilling to sacrifice what is precious to me for the sake of some randos.

The team seems pretty weak. how are they struggling so much against minor gods?