Morningstar33
A unique and refreshing take on both supernatural and harry potter fandom. A character who does not want to settle for being a mere villain, he will be the end game boss. There are some good character interaction and the story is progressing, though a bit slower than I would prefer, as I don't like reading about younglings for extended periods, but it is written well, so it does not bother me much. There is a lot of potential and I am curious as to how he will affect cannon.
I love the story so far, i'm not a writer or a critic but I know a good story when I see one especially how you have your own story mesh well with the main Harry Potter storyline and it doesn't seem forced and your character doesn't change who he is and sticks to his personality well, thats really all I can tell you and I hope you finish this because I hate to see it get dropped when i've come to enjoy the fan-fic.
I can only say BRILLIANT!!! Nice story author you. You open up a new world to me.. ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
I love it awesome mc ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
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