I love the story so far, i'm not a writer or a critic but I know a good story when I see one especially how you have your own story mesh well with the main Harry Potter storyline and it doesn't seem forced and your character doesn't change who he is and sticks to his personality well, thats really all I can tell you and I hope you finish this because I hate to see it get dropped when i've come to enjoy the fan-fic.
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