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he didn't care about anything other than killing half of the universe, after that he destroyed the stone and went farming
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what do you mean dumping?
Being logical and realistic has nothing to do with my opinion my guy. Changing settings without a logical explanation is how plot holes are created.
if she is worth blaming? why is Paul worth blaming but not her. She made a conscious decision to betray her friend and do it with Paul, she wasn't forced. She is the same as Paul and deserve as much blame as him
why? Lilia also betrayed his mother, she has as much blame and is just like Paul
Still end up together? She is also trash just like Paul. She betrayed her friend with her husband, while also betraying the person she was starting a relationship with. She has as much blame as Paul; there is no reason why she can be forgiven but Paul cant. She has made a conscious decision to do it with him, she has the same blame as him.
Please, don't let them be together. This is the time to end their relationship. She fucked up and has now his half brother, there is no recovering from this mistake. Even if he forgives her, don't make him be together with her. However, there should be no forgiving for this, it's over. He shouldn't just kick her out and die, but he shouldn't forgive her either.
that only works if they want to. Most civilians don't want to fight and don't want to risk their lives. Moreover, having little chakra is useless. To go toe to toe against a ninja you need years of training. Civilians against bandits that have fought for years won't last a second. Moreover, the same logic can be applied to bandits.
Im not comparing real life to anything, I'm simply being logical. This is not a comedy novel, if you don't want a garbage novel that if full of plot hopes you have to make things realistic or at least give a reason. Having a story make sense has nothing to do with comparing. For the setting given in this novel, having book of knowledge like that wouldn't make sense
If you spread knowledge about ninjutsu to everyone, people will start dying left and right. There are a lot of bandits and deserters in Naruto, the only reason why they are not that strong (only C class or so usually) is because they don't have resources, so if you give a public access internet, civilians will start dying, a lot. The 5 villages don't have enough people to fight all those bandits that now even know ninjutsu. If you want to make your story go this way, it's fine. But you need to show the consequences of it; otherwise it's a bad story. You can't show the good side and completely ignore the consequence of what implementing something like that will do, it's bad writing. P.S. Most cultivation world, where galaxies and universes are destroyed, will lay waste to 99% of anime worlds. Moreover, if he can access anime worlds I don't see why other can't too; they are Gods.