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Space_Fox

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Been reading for years, now I hardly find anything that I enjoy.. Such is the curse.

2018-08-17 JoinedUnited States
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  • Space_Fox
    Space_Fox2d
    Commented

    Ty

    Ch 12 DxD : Chapter 12 : Dealing with a Fallen II
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  • Space_Fox
    Space_Fox5d
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    ty for chapter

    Ch 11 DxD : Chapter 11 : Dealing with a Fallen I
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  • Space_Fox
    Space_Fox5d
    Replied to Arthur1234

    dxd has more to it than just harem

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  • Space_Fox
    Space_Fox9d
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    And be knew -> And he knew

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  • Space_Fox
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    body. became -> body became

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  • Space_Fox
    Space_Fox9d
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    that -> That*

    People can't just accept it in such a short timeframe. that a superintelligent ruthless alien 'demigod' popped up out of nowhere and took control of everything, even their lives.
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  • Space_Fox
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    it didn't either -> it didn't mean* (either is not necessary)

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  • Space_Fox
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    here though -> here, though*

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  • Space_Fox
    Space_Fox9d
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    was after -> was after all*

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  • Space_Fox
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    split in two yet -> split in two, yet

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  • Space_Fox
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    and two its -> and two, its

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  • Space_Fox
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    50m is about double the biggest whale

    Three fish-shaped dots were detected, two measured roughly five meters (~16ft4) in but the other… It was easily past the fifty meters (~164ft) mark. And they just appeared without warning.
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  • Space_Fox
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    instant moving -> instant; moving*

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  • Space_Fox
    Space_Fox9d
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    present -> presence*

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  • Space_Fox
    Space_Fox9d
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    as what? arrived*

    They settled down as a tall human in a black armor, the unnatural silver irises of eyes, the strange alien yet familiar air around him only adding to the obvious of who this individual was.
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  • Space_Fox
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    distance -> destination*

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  • Space_Fox
    Space_Fox10d
    Commented

    Ty, absolutely love the novel, keep it up!

    Ch 52 52. Pandoran War, Land Battle
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  • Space_Fox
    Space_Fox10d
    Replied to Waluigi_1

    Vietnam was a war dine with a lot less technological capabilities than we have today. Tracking someone even in a jungle is much easier today, and with their technology it would be trivial

    Destroying a helicopter? No problem if he took it by surprise and it wasn't kilometers up in the sky. A squad of fully armed and trained military? Manageable if he goes for the kill and plays dirty. But the two put together and even worse an entire army of them even if small without more advanced troops? No way he survived to tell the tale.
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  • Space_Fox
    Space_Fox10d
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    pretty much*

    And the functions of those two watches, they essentially were smartwatches but with a tactile holographic function added on top, pretty a smartphone you attach to your wrist but with less power and memories.
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  • Space_Fox
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    surprised since* one of his...

    He wasn't surprised one of his tetrapterodon had noticed a big clan arriving from quite a few days away by foot a few days ago but he didn't truly pay more attention than necessary, and that mining was out when a clan arrived and some areas became no zones too, he couldn't bother himself with every clan under the suns.
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