I am sorry I try to be positive but your making the MC a push over. if you didn't do that this story will be better if you fix it I am sure it will get more better reviews.
keep up the great work....................................................................................................................................
great work keep it up ......................................................................................................................................................................................
great work keep it up...................................................................................................................................
maybe I skip something but you didn't kill his brother did you?
Fine, out fo the kindess of my heart, I'll spare you another chapter for today... But can you guys at least leave a review? I only have 13 reviews so far and it would make me happy to have more.
great work keep it up..............................................................................................................................
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Majeh78mth
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your doing good just keep up the great work...........................................................................................................................................................................