dragon_guy
It's always interesting to read good non-Konoha fanfiction. It's a shame it was abandoned, but it's still a good story. There is no nonsense about how the GG suddenly becomes a super scientist after death, versed in genetic engineering better than Orochimaru, there is no chasing tailed beasts, nor creating them, as if this is the solution to all the problems in the world, the GG does not go to put other people's eyes on himself in all holes just because they have cool abilities. This is a story about a guy with a not too moronic golden finger who gets out of all the trouble with his mind and plot armor that is not annoying when reading.
Love this story! There are just to many fanfics about Dark Naruto or Naruto replacements, but not enough fics about new characters that interact with the story characters in a meaningful way. The pre-cast time setting is also interesting since there is less of a need to be true to the plot of Naruto. Please write faster Author sama, cause I can't get enough ;D.
I'm not trying to be rude or anything but I think you need to get a grammar app to fix all your mistakes in the chapters I don't understand why most authors don't download a grammar app it would help their stories so much. But I love your story man and I love that you are focusing on one of the few villages we rarely see in naruto and it's very entertaining just get like Grammarly or something.
this fanfictin is really good mc is smart and decisive its not classic konohagakure village and he is doing almost what he wants, he did not become op like actually his abilities are not that op yea are, but his thinking IQ is his OP power at start mc will be annoying but by more chapters you are gonna be used to it and he will less being annoying
Passionate and compelling story, with a nice characterization of the main character, but also of the others, the grammar is also good, the only flaw is the extreme slowness of the story updates; otherwise very good in my opinion. Furthermore, the other people who reviewed were too narrow with the stars in the various parameters
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