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  • JackalVadim
    JackalVadim1mth
    Commented

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    Ch 115 Ancient Zoan
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    Vongola Primo in One Piece
    Anime & Comics · nyawdao2
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  • JackalVadim
    JackalVadim1mth
    Posted

    The story is very interesting and easy to read, I look forward to each chapter. Author, keep up the good work![img=coins][img=recommend][img=coins]

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    Vongola Primo in One Piece
    Anime & Comics · nyawdao2
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  • JackalVadim
    JackalVadim2mth
    Commented

    the height of the totem is seven meters, is this the size of the house? Or scaling is lame?

    Ch 10 Chapter 10: New Totems(2)
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    Fairy tail: Magic General
    Anime & Comics · Xenodia
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  • JackalVadim
    JackalVadim7mth
    Commented

    I'm no expert, but didn't the arc reactor poison Tony because it saved him from shrapnel? Why does he keep using it?

    Ch 39 Not liking Doughnuts is very normal, okay?!
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    I'm just a normal Doctor (Completed)
    Movies · Monkey_Godking
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  • JackalVadim
    JackalVadim8mth
    Commented

    Author! I have a question! You put "!" at the end of every sentence! Is there a reason for this?! I'm certainly not complaining! The plot is interesting! But! It's a little distracting! And knocks down the mood!

    Ch 6 Chapter 6: One Million Eso
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    Transmigrated With A Movie Tech System
    Movies · Novelette_Seeker
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  • JackalVadim
    JackalVadim10mth
    Posted

    Great story, it's just a pity that it ended at the most interesting place. It remains only to wait for the author to return to this work in the future ...

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    Born as Sakura With a System
    Anime & Comics · NiksElDrago
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  • JackalVadim
    JackalVadim1yr
    Posted

    It's always interesting to read good non-Konoha fanfiction. It's a shame it was abandoned, but it's still a good story. There is no nonsense about how the GG suddenly becomes a super scientist after death, versed in genetic engineering better than Orochimaru, there is no chasing tailed beasts, nor creating them, as if this is the solution to all the problems in the world, the GG does not go to put other people's eyes on himself in all holes just because they have cool abilities. This is a story about a guy with a not too moronic golden finger who gets out of all the trouble with his mind and plot armor that is not annoying when reading.

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    Hard to reincarnate into world of naruto as Iwa shinobi
    Anime & Comics · dragon_guy
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  • JackalVadim
    JackalVadim1yr
    Posted

    Interesting, thanks for your work. It turned out to be a fun and complete story.)[img=coins][img=fp][img=exp][img=fp][img=coins][img=recommend]

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    Diamond Kingdoms Space Mage ( Completed )
    Anime & Comics · Asce
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  • JackalVadim
    JackalVadim1yr
    Posted

    Wow, that's a cool story, man. I didn't expect much, but it's a really good plot and story development. I'll wait until inspiration returns to the author to continue reading.)

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    The Crafter and The Slug
    Anime & Comics · Yay_Pepto
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  • JackalVadim
    JackalVadim1yr
    Posted

    I will wait for the continuation, the author uses interesting ideas for abilities. It's also interesting to see how the characters interact. I wish the author more inspiration.)

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    Re: zero True oni
    Anime & Comics · xRead
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  • JackalVadim
    JackalVadim1yr
    Posted

    Good and interesting story. The writing style of the chapters at the beginning was a bit tedious, adding the end of the last chapter to the beginning of the next is redundant. Otherwise, it's easy to read and the character interactions are lively and fun.

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    ART IS ___
    Anime & Comics · eLPe_X
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  • JackalVadim
    JackalVadim1yr
    Commented

    Sorry the author, I really was going to read this fic, but I just can’t, it’s hard to perceive MC, he’s just faceless, emotionless and mechanical. The character interactions are also soulless, and the increase in strength is just confusing and looks ridiculous for a three year old, jonin level chakra, training without sleep and rest, timeskip, timeskip. No offense, it's just not for me.

    Ch 6 Shinobi training start
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    Mokuton Authority(Hiatus).
    Anime & Comics · ClearSkySage
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  • JackalVadim
    JackalVadim1yr
    Posted

    I would say that GG is too strong, but it suits him very well. Reading this guy beating the shit out of people with a hammer is pretty funny. Thor's story and adventures are at times strangely gripping and moving. I like him, he's brutal and cool.)

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    Reborn as Thor!
    Anime & Comics · Ghost_84
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  • JackalVadim
    JackalVadim1yr
    Posted

    Oh I like your style, fuck the canon! Fog will become the cutest village in the world! Freeze the asses of the heretics![img=coins][img=exp][img=fp]

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    Naruto: Aokiji Yuki {Re-Writing}
    Anime & Comics · Navy_King
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  • JackalVadim
    JackalVadim1yr
    Posted

    Hm, that's good. GG strong? Yes. GG is a dirty cheater? Yes.) YY OP? No. Well hello to the author, I will wait for the chapter.)[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

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    Fairy Tail: Sun Eater
    Anime & Comics · Capt_mermain1
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  • JackalVadim
    JackalVadim1yr
    Posted

    Well, it's one big, funny, and fascinating story.) There's so much here that I don't know what to write about, but... Damn you, stupid author! I'm already tired of harem fanfics, but after this story, I won't even be able to read them! What the heck?!

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    Monkey in the Multiverse
    Anime & Comics · Monkey_Godking
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  • JackalVadim
    JackalVadim1yr
    Commented

    It's actually pretty cute. Since there is no harem tag in the fic, although there were many hints in the story, is it possible to assume that GG's love interest is Hephaestus?) In any case, the story in my opinion is developing well, the interactions of the characters are interesting to watch.

    Ch -6 SPECIAL CHAPTER (R-18 WARNING)
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    In Danmachi with Plasmids
    Anime & Comics · Abadom
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  • JackalVadim
    JackalVadim1yr
    Posted

    Great job, I love the interaction of the characters and the flow of the story. Having a small harem allows you to expand the characters and give them a piece of history without making Pokémon instead of girls, it's also nice to read that GG has friends in his peers who also have relationships, the world seems more alive with each chapter because of this. I could say that the lack of 18+ scenes is disappointing, but it doesn't really change the essence of the story. I wish the author good health and inspiration, I hope to see a sequel sooner or later.

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    Bleached Multiverse
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  • JackalVadim
    JackalVadim1yr
    Replied to JackalVadim

    Well, did I forget to mention what happens to the chakra cost of these jutsu? I understand that he has perfect chakra control, but chakra control does not work as a bonus to reduce the chakra cost of a jutsu, it allows you to control the chakra and not waste it, this will reduce the cost to the norm for performing a jutsu, but again, even with reserves Kage-level chakras cannot be spammed with techniques comparable to bijudams so much and easily, even tailed ones cannot do it, and they are literally made of chakra, so they control it perfectly, but still get tired of constant strong movements, such as bijudams.

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    In Naruto: Reborn as an Uchiha
    Anime & Comics · Hell_Fire_123
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  • JackalVadim
    JackalVadim1yr
    Posted

    This, of course, is interesting, but obviously too much. I mean, he's 5 years old, he's a jack of all trades who can bend all 5 Kage without breaking a sweat, spent a whole WEEK of hard TRAINING to take his fūinjutsu to the next level. He tirelessly trained for 11 months to destroy the territory within a radius of 500 meters with 1 attack, have you seen a radius of 500 meters? This is a hell of a lot, supposedly in the original Naruto could blow up the Rasenshuriken at 10-15 meters but not at all at 500 meters, if GG beat Madara with these Rasengans, then even the Uchiha ghost would be crazy with such developments, oh yes, I said that He's 5 ? And Minato looked at this apocalypse arranged by gg and thought that it was normal for a five-year-old genius to make Hashirama nervously smoke on the sidelines. I'm not saying it's bad, your job and your right, just my opinion that it's an incredibly absurd power and ridiculous people's reaction to it.

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    In Naruto: Reborn as an Uchiha
    Anime & Comics · Hell_Fire_123
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