I have mixed feelings about your work. On the one hand, it is interesting to read even with the Chinese style of storytelling. On the other hand, there is a feeling that the chronology of events is confused, the islands are out of place, it is not clear what is happening with the statistics, the hero is unreasonably strong in some moments, the statistics become either big or small at some moments. (it turns out that the heroes say that they have become much stronger, but in fact they are either weaker or the same as they were), Shiki is in prison, then free, then back in prison, Aokiji, Kuzan and Akainu became admirals, then became admirals again, after which they became admirals again...

I'm not criticizing, but it's funny how different people have different opinions about Ruining Everything. This is my position, but a harem, friendship with a hostile Konoha, becoming Hokage instead of Kazekage, controlling people's minds is a way to “ruin everything.” While I agree with others, the idea of ​​caring for children fits well with Gojo's formulaic character.

Interesting article, I like stories outside of Konoha. I'm looking forward to the continuation. Thanks to the author for your work.[img=More pls][img=Feeling it]

Как он использует метод дыхания в утробе?

Спасибо за главу!

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Замечательное начало истории, с нетерпением жду продолжения. Хотя любопытно, будет ли любовная линия? В любом случае спасибо автору за труд.

Очень интересная идея для истории. С нетерпением жду продолжения. Хочу увидеть как семья мафии занимает свое место в сверхъестественном мире. Спасибо автору за труд!

Sasuke? [img=faceslap]

Хорошая глава, жду продолжения)

I like how the story develops. Usually when a main character becomes too powerful by age 3 (Jonin level or something) it's off-putting, but here it makes sense that he became a seal master at that age (and the desire, and the backstory, and the adult mind, everything leads to this). In other aspects of further development, the main thing is to try not to go too far. A kid who can beat up a kage seems funny. (But the choice of how to develop the story is yours, the author. I'm not asking you to change your story, that's just my opinion). Thanks for your hard work.

Спасибо за главу, жду продолжения) Думаю, что превратить часть армии в камень, не увидив даже части рыжих волос - это хороший способ деморализовать противника)

Спасибо за твой тяжёлый труд, автор! Замечательная история!

Мне нравится история, жду выхода новых глав!) Хотя любопытно кто будет любовные интересом главного героя и будет ли он вообще? [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

I don't think taking hogyeku is a good idea. Yes, it will give him a ton of power and ability, but he already has an incredibly strong foundation. By the time of the battle, Yhwach will be strong enough to at least not lose. If there is a hogyoku, then just like any other bleach story, the character will become too powerful for their universe. This situation can lead to the fact that the main character will not fight with opponents, but will simply show how much stronger he is than everyone else until the end of the plot. But this is just my opinion, it’s up to you, author, how to develop the story)

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Мне нравится, хороший сюжет, интересно посмотреть на взаимодействие персонажей. Главный герой не собирает девушек как покемонов. И не похоже что его единственная цель это стать самым сильным для того чтобы... Просто чтобы быть самым сильным. Он что-то создаёт, развивает свой пантентон, набирает людей, пока что не упирается своей крутость. Так что жду будущих взаимодействий с главными героями и его семьёй, а также реакции их реакции на всё это.

Thank you for your work, it is a pleasure to read this work. Looking forward to the next chapters. Hello to the author. Not 5 full stars because I don't want it to seem like the review was written by a bot)

Thanks for the chapter. I don’t know why, but it’s funny for me to imagine how the heroes will scare each other with threats of going to the “Field of Punishment” in the kingdom of Hades.

It is important to have a waifu for the main character) He seems a little lonely. I'm all for bleach.