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It's always interesting to read good non-Konoha fanfiction. It's a shame it was abandoned, but it's still a good story. There is no nonsense about how the GG suddenly becomes a super scientist after death, versed in genetic engineering better than Orochimaru, there is no chasing tailed beasts, nor creating them, as if this is the solution to all the problems in the world, the GG does not go to put other people's eyes on himself in all holes just because they have cool abilities. This is a story about a guy with a not too moronic golden finger who gets out of all the trouble with his mind and plot armor that is not annoying when reading.
Sorry the author, I really was going to read this fic, but I just can’t, it’s hard to perceive MC, he’s just faceless, emotionless and mechanical. The character interactions are also soulless, and the increase in strength is just confusing and looks ridiculous for a three year old, jonin level chakra, training without sleep and rest, timeskip, timeskip. No offense, it's just not for me.
It's actually pretty cute. Since there is no harem tag in the fic, although there were many hints in the story, is it possible to assume that GG's love interest is Hephaestus?) In any case, the story in my opinion is developing well, the interactions of the characters are interesting to watch.
Great job, I love the interaction of the characters and the flow of the story. Having a small harem allows you to expand the characters and give them a piece of history without making Pokémon instead of girls, it's also nice to read that GG has friends in his peers who also have relationships, the world seems more alive with each chapter because of this. I could say that the lack of 18+ scenes is disappointing, but it doesn't really change the essence of the story. I wish the author good health and inspiration, I hope to see a sequel sooner or later.
Well, did I forget to mention what happens to the chakra cost of these jutsu? I understand that he has perfect chakra control, but chakra control does not work as a bonus to reduce the chakra cost of a jutsu, it allows you to control the chakra and not waste it, this will reduce the cost to the norm for performing a jutsu, but again, even with reserves Kage-level chakras cannot be spammed with techniques comparable to bijudams so much and easily, even tailed ones cannot do it, and they are literally made of chakra, so they control it perfectly, but still get tired of constant strong movements, such as bijudams.
This, of course, is interesting, but obviously too much. I mean, he's 5 years old, he's a jack of all trades who can bend all 5 Kage without breaking a sweat, spent a whole WEEK of hard TRAINING to take his fūinjutsu to the next level. He tirelessly trained for 11 months to destroy the territory within a radius of 500 meters with 1 attack, have you seen a radius of 500 meters? This is a hell of a lot, supposedly in the original Naruto could blow up the Rasenshuriken at 10-15 meters but not at all at 500 meters, if GG beat Madara with these Rasengans, then even the Uchiha ghost would be crazy with such developments, oh yes, I said that He's 5 ? And Minato looked at this apocalypse arranged by gg and thought that it was normal for a five-year-old genius to make Hashirama nervously smoke on the sidelines. I'm not saying it's bad, your job and your right, just my opinion that it's an incredibly absurd power and ridiculous people's reaction to it.