I'm not trying to be rude or anything but I think you need to get a grammar app to fix all your mistakes in the chapters I don't understand why most authors don't download a grammar app it would help their stories so much. But I love your story man and I love that you are focusing on one of the few villages we rarely see in naruto and it's very entertaining just get like Grammarly or something.
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