Reviews of Golden Virgin in Marvel

So the writing is sht tbh.. genders mixed, words mixed, some parts just don't make sense and in others it's the wrong word. Some other things like if he is blind how can he use a computer, phones etc ? For me anyway I feel you ruined the story by making him a god.. I mean yeah he can get involved with the cosmo entities but now the rest of the story is ruined. Whatever happens doesn't matter cause he's too strong. Like thanos etc don't stand a chance soo... I feel if you left him at the peak of 8th sense it would have been a lot more interesting with the fights/progress of the story. Author as well doesn't seem to care, no reply’s and no improvement's that people have point out in comments. Lastly not the authors fault but I am fed up with all the horny kids in the comment's shouting harem in every chapter. Do you not know his character ? Do you know what a buddha means ? Author if you do acc read this please go back and edit your chapters and correct your mistakes... It will make it much more readable and you can acc enjoy it. Don't give in to the demands that are just stupid and change your char.

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Honestly the writing is so bad that I couldn’t even get past the first chapter. It might have a great story hidden behind that horrible writing but until it’s at least readable imma dip.

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Ótimaima história, uma pena que o autor desistiu de escreve-la, mas mesmo assim foi bom ler ela. Qualidade da escrita ruim, mas é possível entender.

Tell me when he has correcting everything so I can read in peace..... ..... ....... ...... Burn your cosmos Saint......... For Athena......... ....

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I honestly think i lost brain cells reading this. It’s like the author combined his horrible writing skills with his inacceptance to the concept of genders.

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This fanfic seems to be done with a translator but in itself a very good story.............................................................................................

while there are many errors, I truly enjoy this story and the warm feel of it, A man who has experienced many... many trials and seems to have faced death many times yet he finds purity in it and enters the marvel world somehow, he begins to share his life experience with those who need it. a caring aura, yet extreme power carefully held back, a 'daughter' I stress daughter due to having no blood relation, the child seems to have no memories and is truly a child, however, is Athena. to the author, Keep it up!