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    starking29d
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    I vote for this novel the template system thank you

    Ch 17 VERY IMPORTANT
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  • starking
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    thank you for the chapter I'm enjoying your novel very much so can you please don't drop it also I don't know if you've already made more chapters ahead but since I'm on this chapter I don't think I've ever seen it to where the MC asks the Emperor who to choose you know when the Crown Prince is dead or something like that you know he asked or he sends a letter to the emperor saying that he's willing to choose whatever Emperor picks as the next person on the throne I'll never seen that so I thought maybe I might mention it and you might put it on novel or not maybe you already figured out what you want to do anyway thank you for the chapter and please continue making more of them

    Ch 11 Political Turmoil
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    Naruto

    Ch 53 Chapter 53: Sunny skies brings forth a forgotten word, Hope.
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    starking2mth
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    thank you

    Ch 53 The Plot Never Stops
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    starking2mth
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    congratulations to you also congratulations to me for getting to read more chapters soon

    Ch 67 GOOD NEWS
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    thank you for the chapter just so we're clear I hope that you allow the twins to beat up Tony Stark it's only fair especially if you have Spider-Man bind Tony Stark's powers and then have a twins pumbling that would be an excellent chapter to have in my opinion

    Ch 258 C258 Long Awaited ‘Talk’
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    starking4mth
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    I enjoyed the first 40 chapters there are few grammar mistakes here and there and obviously it's not the perfect book but it is a pretty good book good read keeps you entertained which is what you want on this sort of thing I recommend it although I do have one problem and there is no more chapters after 40 and currently which sucks because I got caught up in it that I want to read more oh no it's pretty good book but if someone is reading this right now and has any connection to the author please tell him to hurry up and write more after all I got to know what happens next

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    starking4mth
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    thank you for the chapter

    Anyway as I am a generous writer if THIS paragraph has 15 comments I will give you another chapter, this comment must include what you like/dislike about the FF or any idea you would like to see, I will give you likes to the ones I consider valid.
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  • starking
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    thank you for the chapter

    lothar's devotion has touched my heart, so 15 comments in THIS paragraph you will get an extra chapter or 5 reviews no matter the ratings.
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  • starking
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    well I'm here again with another idea since you keep asking for them and you used them in the book so I'll give you another one here it is toothpaste now I know what you're thinking you're thinking this isn't really big idea but it's a huge idea first off you Market it to nobles with a flavored mint kind Nobles will appreciate this keeping their breath minty fresh plus helping the teeth the second idea being the same as the first basically is that you Market a more bland kind of toothpaste to the commoners now nobility will buy it for their servants and common people will buy it for themselves especially if it has benefits of protecting the teeth especially helping get rid of bad breath toothpaste is a billion dollar industry in our world you can imagine the benefits it will have in their world not to mention the little accessories for instance you need a toothbrush right that's a very little accessory you know that right hahaha in case there's also a leather bag perhaps you can get some floss toothpicks as well as fingernail clippers you know personal hygiene items now they're easy to make and they don't cost a fortune but they do generate a great amount of Revenue for the one who owns it and sells it nobility will buy it like hotcakes and the commoner people will follow along also don't forget scissors barber shops and other such places for instance a beauty salon for women these are all great things to generate Revenue easy to make low cost but great returns well that's it for now I just want to say I really enjoy your book or should I say light novel whatever you going to call it I just really like it and I hope that you continue to provide me with long chapters because I really enjoy the long chapters also can you please make it more frequently like two chapters a day I know that's a bit much but I can't help it I really like it but thank you for your time and effort

    Ch 37 Noblesse oblige III
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    I enjoyed it you're a good writer please continue to give me more chapters specially the long ones thank you for your effort time and patience because I'm sure it took a lot of that to write anything this good takes patience but most importantly persistence so I just like to say once again thank you

    Ch 35 Noblesse oblige I
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    well I see you used some of my ideas so I'll give you a few more first off competition now they are great source of money but the biggest gain one can get from competitions it's competent employees for instance in this world they only care about who can joust and sword fight this is all the competitions they have the MC could create a blacksmith competition which then will have all the competent capable and best blacksmiths of the world coming towards his land to compete to serve him but not just blacksmith you could have artisans painters sculptors you name it you can have a competition for it basically feeding your ability of getting competent capable people one of the other competitions you would have is a beauty competition now yes you will get money but the real price a beauty competition would have in that time period will be the ability to arrange marriages which is a big Power in the noble circles you can even find commoner women who are beautiful and help them Elevate themselves to a noble wife which would ensure loyalty amongst your own people as well as gaining spies also don't forget math competitions and memory competitions you can find capable people they can do your taxes if you had these competitions LOL but being serious having a boat men's competition would see that you'd have a finer Navy now yes these competitions will cost you a little bit of money for the purse and Awards that you have to give out but as long as you own the lodges and bars you make that money back easily also don't forget animal competitions for instance the best horses fastest strongest Etc perhaps the best cows so you can choose the best cows for breeding best hunting dogs etc etc you get it also music and writing competitions you always need good entertainment to keep the masses happy I hope these ideas help

    Ch 33 Deals with the crown
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    starking5mth
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    thank you

    Ch 104 Batman's God Killing Project
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    first off I want to say thank you for the chapter second off I'd like to say thank you for using my ideas I saw a couple of the ideas I gave you in this chapter so I thank you for using them next since you've used my ideas I would like to give you a couple more like really cool idea and one of the best ideas for manipulating the masses is printing press now they've been around for like two to four hundred years so it shouldn't be too hard for him to make as it stands he could make quite a bit of propaganda with the printing press newspaper are notoriously good at manipulating the peasant class he could generate a lot of propaganda with a newspaper and it would also bring news and other things to his people in his territories with it he could practically destroy the faith of the seven because unlike them once the newspapers out people would believe everything that newspaper said over some guy who's in a robe it's happened throughout history so that's one of the best ideas I can give you is the printing press it can make a lot of money as well just so you're aware advertisements and whatnot next up toys now I know what you're thinking why toys well if he is going to be the Lord for several decades if not maybe half a century he will eventually run into the newer generation and if the newer generation is to have a good idea of they're Lord it would be a good idea for him to invent toys and play things for them to enjoy cheap things easy for him to make for instance doll houses and dolls for young ladies and toy cars trucks easy thing for him to make with wood for the boys and plus also Sports such as balls and things of this nature now he might not give them away to everyone they can give them way to orphans that he sponsors or orphanages the he will build and he can give the toys away for them which will imply that the other other people that have children will be less if they did not buy these toys for that for their own kids so you see he can generate profit as well as be looked upon greatly by the kids that's securing the Next Generation anyway that's all for now thank you for the chapter and your hard work

    Ch 20 The return
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  • starking
    starking5mth
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    okay since you want some ideas I'll give you some one of the biggest things Rome is known for is it's Coliseum so why not he build one on his land and make it really Grand spectacle of it and make a lot of money from it next idea pocket watches specifically gold pocket watches now they were a bit complicated to make but they've been around for like 200 years and he could sell them to the Nobles watches were not a big thing in the middle or dark ages so he can probably make a fortune if he sold some pocket watches to Nobles you know and kings queens would probably take one too next idea Loom and textile industry now the textile industry is always been a huge Market since he's land is in the South he could have cotton as his cash crop spin it on a loom and so into fabric and other clothes also just so you're aware dies of any kind of always been expensive and olden times so if he was to die clothes such as purple or blue he could start a new fashion trends and essentially make a huge amount of money off of this of course this would be a time-consuming it probably taking a year or two to build once it's built he'd make fortunes and I said fortunes with an capital s next idea glasses and what I mean by glasses is the ones you put on your face to see better with those glasses are a pinnacle in their time a lot of people especially Nobles have had eye troubles so it would be a great idea to invent these glasses and present them to the king or Noble he can make a fortune as well as being known as something of inventor now the last idea and probably the best idea of all of them the ones I've just given you would be to create penicillin it's not the hardest thing to do after all it is just mold but it is a critical component and health he should be able to know it since he is from the future with all the knowledge he has he should have knowledge of how to create penicillin and that is all the ideas for now I have given you other ideas I believe and I hope these ideas are useful to you goodbye

    Ch 20 Chapter tomorrow
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  • starking
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    I enjoy the story please keep up the good work and please give me more chapters thank you as far as advice I do have a few suggestions for the money issue . what he needs to make is a simple but easy thing for him to do would be to make a large restaurant / Hotel/ bar across his territory he would make simple ones but in Capital Cities such as Kings Landing he would make a fancy one for Noble Lords and another one four the commoners district the food they would serve would be his own recipes also along with the food that he would be shipping there so low cost alcohol obviously he's making would be superior thus people would would come to establishment to enjoy it and as far as making bedrooms are concerned obviously it would be a good idea to have places where he can or some of his men and he can rest also another idea would be for him to make salt flats salt is extremely expensive in olden times everyone needs it to survive thus everyone has the purchase it and thus dries up the cost since he's obviously close to an ocean since he has a fleet of ships he can obviously make some salt Plains and make a lot of money from that it's quick and easy also in case you're forgetting remember that the reach Main customer is the North what he can do is sell his products or should I say trade his products of food for iron and wood lowering his cost significantly is it a few suggestions I can think of right now I hope they're helpful in any case whether you're taking or not it doesn't matter your story is great please continue thank you for your time and

    Ch 14 Maintaining the status quo
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  • starking
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    you asked for some ideas and I have a couple if you'd like to implement them in your story I think it would help your story first off the telegraph it's a very simple way of communication all you need is a battery or a magnetic piece of metal and a wire stretching from a long distance and you basically have a telegraph a little electric current in it and it's not hard to make it's just takes a little bit of knowing how to do it something you're MC should know. second if you know anything about the old west then you'll find Lots of great ideas if you can Implement in your story one of them would be the stagecoach it's a great way of traveling quickly and making money if he built the roads that would be another thing he could do it's building the roads connecting his the towns along with a stagecoach line plus having the telegraph and he'd have an extreme amount of control over his lands compared to the other Lords territories third Springs a simple idea easy to make also extremely convenient you see he could make nice extremely nice stylish carriages with a spring underneath they would be the best carriages in the world all the Nobles would want them last idea for now would be making doctors you see in westro there is no official doctors yes you have the Masters but they're a jack of all trades not really an official doctor and they apparently do not help the common Folk so if he was to make an organization directly under him completely of doctors and nurses taking care of everyone you'd have extreme amount of power and popularity from everybody Lords and Nobles to common people would love him and it would bring a lot of money

    Ch 10 king's landing
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  • starking
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    well for last names you can go with Skywalker or craftsman or perhaps stormSlayer and as for first names you can go with Sam Maybe Luke or Will and as for is superhero names go I have always kind of considered dragon for instance the MC can say my code name is dragon it sounds good plus I'm pretty sure there's no heroes in the Marvel verse they're called dragon you can always add something to it to make it sound better for instance dragon slayer anyway I hope my suggestions give you inspiration have a Happy Thanksgiving and a blessed day

    Ch 236 Help me guys
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    my idea is for him to go and buy old apartment buildings or old stuff first and then repair it that way he can be seen as the people's hero for instance get started on his fortune he buys a few old antiques and sell them for the money you know like old phones or something like that as well old technology then once he's made enough money he buys an old apartment building it's broken down Heap right then he restores it completely new and then he makes it to where people can live there cheaply that's giving him money but also doing a service to the people and being a people hero for instance he could repair roads and bridges with his restoring power he can restore anything and it would be a great help to humanity also side note make sure MC changes the story it's not just like animation TV show it's different but try to make it a good change because a lot of other fanfiction make the MC have a bad change in the story anyway that's just my suggestion

    Ch 10 Not so Amazo
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  • starking
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    I like your writing I have your novel in my library and I check it pretty much daily so I do like your writing and enjoy your book immensely so please continue to do so if I had some advice for you it would be that I would want you to give me more chapters also if you want something to make money with in this novel then I recommend inventing something getting the patent for it and then licensing it to a company for instance at the time of the main character in the novel I believe that the smartphone is not quite invented or is not as smart as it is today what you would do is use your system to find components for the modern smartphone and then make those components and then patent it and then maybe send something to the company to show that your patent is better and that they should use it you can always go with programming as well but I wouldn't necessarily do this because you have to have a background in that as to if you invent something it could be an accidental for like a school project or something or some kind of crazy idea that you want to try

    Ch 36 Chapter 33: Future Plans
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