Would have been cool to see him going agaisnt the ppl in blue lock

I mean doesn’t big mom have the soul soul fruit. Ghosts are essentialy souls… so is haki. This story could have been kinda intresting but making the ghosts all powerful makes no sense

Because if you think about it aswell his clan with there body are beasts with Yang chakra, why they live so long. Now with this template the spiritual pressure is essentially yin chakra. So mixing the two together makes the mc 2x as powerful

It would be cool if we see some more of the chakra side of the mc aswell, I mean he was called fire god and as with his clan he should be a beast in sealing. Will be cool if he incorporated it more in fights

Not the leagues falt as it shouldn’t be there responsibility. The governments fault for not giving the death penalty

Yo, they so fcked. Only reason the villains can have confidence is cause dc heros don’t kill. It is so much easier to kill than to capture. Take away that, villains have no chance

This story is a decent read if you are new to video game novels. Otherwise it suffers in a few places that makes it painful to read. One the mc is hopelessly nieve. People will tell him certain things as they are important but either the mc ignores this or just tells it to the world. He doesn’t have any awareness. It was explained that he was in the top 1% for the previous best game. Why is it then that the mc isn’t competent? It’s smaller things like this that don’t aline when reading that makes it a bit annoying to read if you care about the details. Things are said but not explained. Often going into the comments to clarify things that happen as it’s not worded correctly. Anything thing the story suffers from is the regresser. It had the potential to add an interesting twist but it feels like the regresser is becoming the mc of the story. This is why I mentioned its better for newer readers, as if you have read a lot of this genre you are tired of the mc always being a regresser. Overall if you are a newish reader or just starting to get into this genre then it will be a good read but for the more experienced I wouldn’t recommend

Such an interesting idea, usually it’s the basic always toad, slug or snake. It makes so much sense for her to do it with the monkeys. Think about wukong great sage equaling heaven. This gives her time make peace with herself with meditation again linking into how wukong had to meditate loads and be at peace with himself from the Buddhist teachings

Won’t lie I hope it makes it into the mc’s main team! Love Milotic, one of the best water types :)

What happened to the shiny feebas?

Okay, so I have many problems with this story. First of all you bring him into the world of fairy tail a world of magic and his first thoughts and only goal is to do alchemy? He wants to be like full metal alchemy If you wanted this then just do a full metal alchemy story.. Mc’s wants to not be friends with mavis but wants to be her subordinat? What. She is a child. The story makes no sense so far and just makes the mc seem stupid. The thing that has annoyed me the most is being deceived by the author. You hinted in the title it was magic and in the synopsis there is no mention at all about the mc not having magic so he will focus on the alchemy instead and overcome it. In fact if this was mentioned in the description I wouldn’t been so turned off by the story. Essentially, you are missinforming the readers to click the story and get more views. Where as if you put what the story was acc about you wouldn’t have got as many. This is what has annoyed me the most. That may not have been your intention but this is what it has felt like.

I love the story and how detailed it is, shows the author cares about it a lot. Especially, with the notes at the end. Something I just can’t get behind thou is shimi being the love interest. She is so boring and personaly is a downer on the story. Just seems so basic to chose her, she will age and die soon without bs mc increasing her lifespan. Would have been cool to see the mc get with master Fei? Or the female celestial. Someone who will live as long as him, can stay by his side, add value with there wisdom and power. Not just being a sidepiece etc

Gildarts man Irene woman

So what was in the box roger left 👀

Is the mc stupid? Like I understood when he didn’t check the keys staight away cause he saw his mother alive again… but after all that time your not even having a look at the keys that bought you there in the first place? Makes no sense

Makes no sense, it’s been an alright story so far one of the good ones. However, like with most good stories on here then love life has destroyed it 😂

If you think about it the gods are pathetic af in this. How many primordials had to help them? I count 7.. whilst what about the titans? 1 and he didn’ even help. Feels bad for the titans 😂

It would be kinda cool if he built up a team to go against blue locker and against the ego guy. Be kinda like an atagonist

Like I love the tower idea, and then expanding on that and building up the holy son rep while still being in reaching distance strength wise to his peers if that makes sense

It’s a bit annoying how he comments about other characters being bad and hypocritical and then goes and manipulates them to be on his side.. like dumblodore and the greater good. Makes him seem like a hypocrite. Other than that very interesting so far. I wish he wasn’t so overpowered as it would make for a more intresting story. Imagining the mc as a support with a tank like build. So he has the soul rings he has but isn’t godlike at what 2 months after turning 6 haha Just will add a more deeper feel to the story instead of the mc smashing through everything.