Reviews of Erotic RPG: I am in the Game world, But My Heroines are Villainesses

What I like about this novel is the mc's mentality he have Top G mindset. He don't let his emotional control him he thinks before he speak always be clam and collected. This is only the beginning of this novel The story pacing is good I hope I will enjoy this.

Its looks very promising and I am also liking the MC. Keep up the awesome work.[img=recommend]

Seen this novel got to close to be dropped make me very sad especially when I remember in one year before we got two to three chapters per day, reading this was very fun, I like the mc development and the plot of this novel because it was a new and creative (not like the other novel when their mc’s got everything they want,A monotonous and repeated story) so I very sad and disappointed 😔

Good novel for time pass ,i enjoyed some parts while there were some rocky parts,it was still decent. I could write a whole review but unfortunately too lazy , so I will only ask this WHEN ARE YOU PLANNING TO UPDATE!?

I've read this book till chapter no. -??(Telekinesis) and till that moment I found that *update stability is the only good point here (as it was in amy Library for a month).AUTHOR isn't communicative --ok no problem but, he/she isn't even fixing errors.Writing quality: Not good at all😐. Many vocabulary and grammatical mistakes can be found in every other paragraph so... 2/5 for it.Story development: It's okay-ish(¿?), As the story was progressing I thought it was slow paced. Usually I'm okay with that but here it was not that good of an experience so... 2/5 for itCharacter design: It's Bad like very bad. MC in self has very bad character design and the side characters are not explained properly too so... 0/5 if possible but 1/5.Updating stability: As I've said/wrote before it is the good thing here(🤷) so... 3/5.World Background: This was okay but, felt like an in-game effect was going on. And MC was really tied with it so... 2/5But the plot was good in some places.Well anyway, those who want to read this book have Fun 🤟 but, I can't read this any longer it isn't enjoyable to me.Well, Have a good Time🤟ok then...

change the rating..., how about I think I'll leave the story, apart from the filler, it's too predictable and it's gotten to the point that I don't even read the novel, I just keep an eye on it...

Umm the story is good but to me it seemed as if the dialogue between the characters lacked emotion. Like I had no idea whether character were speaking in a monotone way or cheerfully. Describing their emotions would make it much better at least that's wat I think overall story not bad

This novel has a quality till now latest chapter i have not got any complaint regarding any thing in this novel , dialogue , plot , world development and character design it's good ,, after first arc is completed the novel gain fast paced so you will see the dialogue between character to be quite fast ⏩ which was written good or else i don't what would happen 🧐 ... i am just waiting for academic arc hopefully this arc will be good like the first arc where faceslapping and true villain we can see .. thanks author for your time and creativity in this novel hope you will continue writing in future 🙏.

amazing novel I really enjoy it I hope he gets back at everyone who has wrong him in the future just wish Author stop using the word Albeit so frequently tho

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WQ: 4* There are very noticeable grammatical errors throughout the story, but they aren't egregious, nor do they ruin your immersion so it's passable. The author does a good job at describing things for the readers through the story which gets a huge applause from me. Stability of Updates: 4* Not the best, around twice a week, but from the last chapter it seems it might pick up in speed. Story Development: 4* A little, if not, very slow, it gets a pass since the story is still in the 'info dump' stage, but I am hoping it picks up in pace later on in the plot. Character Design: 5* MC is very interesting, I like his motives, I also like that he doesn't wear his heart on his sleeve, though I will say I don't really like how he has mentioned that he wants to make the enemy girls his 'dogs' but this is a villain story so what can ya do. You get a lot of insight into how the side characters think and feel which I really like, because it makes it so the story doesn't just feel like a one-man show. The villains are kind of basic in personality, or just in general aren't really fleshed out but this gets a pass from me since they aren't really prevalent in the story. (FYI I consider his stepmother and half-sister not to be villains but rather side characters despite how the story portrays them) World Background: 4* I struggle to explain my thoughts on WBG in reviews typically, but I'll try my best here. The world building is good don't get me wrong, but it just feels sort of random, like the author picked out info out of a hat and inserted in his story. It all functions together well but nevertheless the feeling is there. tl;dr: read it it's good.

The best novel I've read of this kind so far..I hope you keep downloading faster .................................................................. . .

Looking forward to it...................

Author please why did you abandon this novel for the other one

I hope this novel is not to be dropped (reading this was good, but the chapters from the supposed MC’s view point were nerve-promising) any way I really hope that this novel will continue

The mc is a wannabe “hard willed” guy who is a hypocrite. He wants to “crave” his own destiny while being led by it , lol. And also , when a women was suggesting him to back off from danger , he says “she has no right in intefering with his life” , while he goes on to talk to a girl about how she has no talent for a certain affinity and literally puts his nose into it, wonder how he got that “right” all of a sudden. The mc is supposed to be a fusion of his previous soul and the original owners soul but somehow , majority of his actions and traits are from the ex owner’s. ,

Hey. Author San. When will the update come?

so the book has been dropped huh ...one of favs

I thing this has some mistake but if you have time to read novel so I recommend you for this novel. it really is enjoyable . you don't feel bored or anything so get it a try you don't regret it.

It is a good novel.It has a good storyline.Character design is also very good.