All this tall abt him holding back makes me really need him to fight noumu

Oh in that case I've already responded haha. I'll be deleting the reply with my username now that you've seen it, don't want everybody to have access to that.

It's very hard to put how I feel about this story into sensible words, but the narration and plot of this book feels like I'm having a conversation with the story rather than being a third party witnessing the events unfold if that makes sense, and to me it kills the whimsy of storytelling and makes it into a novel I can't find myself immersing into. Not a fan of that writing style.

just search up image converter lol

I mean if we equalize verses, in One Piece a great deal of haki counters any Devil Fruit ability, so theoretically the same can be said Infinity/other Cursed Techniques.

now that i think about it shouldnt one piece exist in the jjk verse id really love if yuji, who really wanted to do anime character moves, gets shocked by zoro existing

thank you for the chapter

well the paragraph did use the adjective "weird" to describe her clothes lol

No rct for gojo then? Rip buddy

Could do with faster pacing and there's hardly a reason to make the MC Zoro when his personality couldn't be anymore different from his canon counterpart. Other than that the story is fantastic, it hits all the emotional beats perfectly and is very immersive. 4.4 Stars.

i can deadass picture this panel, zoro with megumi in his arms in one of the chairs, his surroundings blurred out while this sentence is placed in a pitch black panel, like the typical representation of verbal curses in jjk

Tyftc

Paced well and the themes are great, if a bit out of the author's hands at times. In the words of one of the worlds characters, the MC is very peculiar, yet somehow enchanting; this of course makes for a very unique and refreshing read. Also, the main cast are very well interpreted in this story making it truly feel like this fanfiction belongs in that universe instead of being immersion breaking. 4.8 Stars. Highly recommend.

Yeah that makes sense, I saw that ahead as well, idk why I didn’t account for damage being apart of strength, perhaps because it’s unconventionally called physique here but anyways yea sorry for the hubbub

This is worded very poorly for the argument it’s trying to make, even though the argument is correct.

i dont understand the numbers in brackets

dude is now in my headcanon as killer bee

fantastic storytelling, so far aside from the mechanics there hasnt been a shred of canon and yet this story holds itself up easily your story, you can do what you want, but please dont add worldhopping

author is weird plotpoints are weird dropped on chapter two because the mc says hes going to kill his parents when he grows up, which is already crazy, then it segues into a scene where the mother starts jilling herself to baby!MC suckling her teat there are also grammatical errors but those are second in the list of complaints batshit insane, writing quality and character design are a flat 1*