Review Detail of therealet in Erotic RPG: I am in the Game world, But My Heroines are Villainesses

WQ: 4* There are very noticeable grammatical errors throughout the story, but they aren't egregious, nor do they ruin your immersion so it's passable. The author does a good job at describing things for the readers through the story which gets a huge applause from me. Stability of Updates: 4* Not the best, around twice a week, but from the last chapter it seems it might pick up in speed. Story Development: 4* A little, if not, very slow, it gets a pass since the story is still in the 'info dump' stage, but I am hoping it picks up in pace later on in the plot. Character Design: 5* MC is very interesting, I like his motives, I also like that he doesn't wear his heart on his sleeve, though I will say I don't really like how he has mentioned that he wants to make the enemy girls his 'dogs' but this is a villain story so what can ya do. You get a lot of insight into how the side characters think and feel which I really like, because it makes it so the story doesn't just feel like a one-man show. The villains are kind of basic in personality, or just in general aren't really fleshed out but this gets a pass from me since they aren't really prevalent in the story. (FYI I consider his stepmother and half-sister not to be villains but rather side characters despite how the story portrays them) World Background: 4* I struggle to explain my thoughts on WBG in reviews typically, but I'll try my best here. The world building is good don't get me wrong, but it just feels sort of random, like the author picked out info out of a hat and inserted in his story. It all functions together well but nevertheless the feeling is there. tl;dr: read it it's good.