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I've read this book till chapter no. -??(Telekinesis) and till that moment I found that *update stability is the only good point here (as it was in amy Library for a month).AUTHOR isn't communicative --ok no problem but, he/she isn't even fixing errors.Writing quality: Not good at all😐. Many vocabulary and grammatical mistakes can be found in every other paragraph so... 2/5 for it.Story development: It's okay-ish(¿?), As the story was progressing I thought it was slow paced. Usually I'm okay with that but here it was not that good of an experience so... 2/5 for itCharacter design: It's Bad like very bad. MC in self has very bad character design and the side characters are not explained properly too so... 0/5 if possible but 1/5.Updating stability: As I've said/wrote before it is the good thing here(🤷) so... 3/5.World Background: This was okay but, felt like an in-game effect was going on. And MC was really tied with it so... 2/5But the plot was good in some places.Well anyway, those who want to read this book have Fun 🤟 but, I can't read this any longer it isn't enjoyable to me.Well, Have a good Time🤟ok then...

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Erotic RPG: I am in the Game world, But My Heroines are Villainesses

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there seems to be something wrong with my comments they don't break in para when I post it and auto correction' also not working. I wonder why🤔