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Dimensional Descent

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Vladislav_Romanov
Vladislav_RomanovLv14Vladislav_Romanov

Hi 1. The Einstein once said. The definition of insanity is doing the same thing over and over and expecting different results. The MC confessed to the very same girl more than 400 times during 4 years without getting any answer. Just from that you can see he is an idiot. That girl is the same. Maybe it is good that two idiots found one another. But from my perspective it is a tragedy. 2. The story is good for 2-3 hours of reading but it becomes boring later. All the same.. I really do think that books more tham 700-800 chapters are overkill. Before writing the book you should know how to end it. Make a story and only then write. Imagine if you start to build a house but you do not know how it will looks like or how many floors/rooms it will have what will you build?? This book is exactly the same. Author just spilling words for updates. The more you read the worse it becomes. 3. There is no system to measure the person power. The MC learns something becomes stronger and stronger but how strong exactly? How much one skill stonger than the other? Magic force, dream force, star force e.t.c. what are the ranking between them? I completly lost track... It all looks like a mess and who is stronger depends on author mood. If it is so why write about cultivation, levels, forces. All of them are meaningless. 4. The overall feeling about the book is negative. People stuggling, dying, scheming, used by others.... There is no real trust, support, loyalty, happiness in the book (almost none). Most of it is negative. Can not continue anymore.

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Lolbroman25
Lolbroman25Lv14Lolbroman25

Really great so far. I'd give it a try. So far it has a highschool crush, rivals, murder, high-tech gadgets (but not for long), and discrimination. Basically, all the stuff life comes with. Has a lot of potential, so hop on the wagon early!

tangboi
tangboiLv13tangboi

What a waste of time, read to 1600 chapters and dropped cause the author writing quality is so illogical. MC is basically "OP" but brain dead at the same time. So many plotholes. The 1600 chapter really ended it for me. This is one of the few novels where I’d rather skim read instead because the author just word vomits a bunch of irrelevant information.

Kayle_Mighty
Kayle_MightyLv1Kayle_Mighty

Nevermind, I dropped it again. The story got so good when he finally set his mind towards a goal, but then it got ruined. The whole situation with Aina and Rychard was so stupid and uncalled for. And some people will say “but Aina’s personality got reset” but Idgaf. She still had her memories. Allowing another guy to court her was bs, and it was bad enough, but somewhere along the line it suddenly turned into a situation where they’re about to get married. Rychard was absolutely unnecessary to the story. He got beaten, went home, used a story to have a go at The Linux family which is Leonel’s mother’s family. You’re telling me, that every random person that hears the name ‘Morales’ will immediately know that they’re an extremely powerful family, and look at Leonel a bit warily, however, a guy from a 6th dimensional family somehow had no idea who they were? Really? And he was spreading a story about leonel’s mother having a child with a “nobody” and yet, the people around him couldn’t tell that that “nobody” is from a 7th dimensional family? Let’s agree that the story was kept secret. When they spread the story and mentioned the name ‘Morales’, nobody thought about questioning wether he’s related to the morales family or not? They just went with “haha, she married a nobody and gave birth to a piece of trash.” And how convenient that it wasn’t until Leonel almost killed Rychard that somehow they realized that “oh, he’s a Morales.” For all the good writing that was put into this novel, this arc ruined it for me, big time. Doubt I can continue.

Immortal_Peak
Immortal_PeakLv2Immortal_Peak

Have always loved spec's novels. Honestly, I almost dropped his first novel multiple times. In fact, I almost didn't read this one because I'm more of a cultivation novel junky, but once again, he didn't disappoint I feel that this novel isn't one I should try to describe too much. You'll understand what I mean when or if you read... It touches upon a lot of concepts that seem tired and overdone, but I've legitimately never seen them done like this. So... just take my word for it and give it a shot.

LuciferW
LuciferWLv4LuciferW

Nothing more to say other than Awespec tier story. I am also reading his 2 other works and i am impressed by how consistently good these novels are. Just 22 chapters and I am already hooked. The story and world setting is interesting and unique. The characters likable, not one-dimensional and our MC has a more human/normal side in comparison to Dyon and Ryou. I just hope that unlike the previous works, where Dyon lost his parents and Ryou's parents' situation is ambiguous we can have more interaction with the MC's father and mother earlier in the story. All in all its definetly worth reading and I would also recommend you checking Awespec's other works too.

Idragon
IdragonLv4Idragon

MC keeps on making mistakes and keeps regretting it. Although he himself know that and always focus on it but it still happens. It just keeps on looping and seems like like author is deliberately making every single person target MC. This theme keeps on repeating and getting very annoying. Though I gave the story a good chance and read till ch 350 but I’m dropping it. It feels like no matter how much MC gains power he is still a pathetic loser.

Oto
OtoLv14Oto

Came back to leave another review after my previous one was deleted for being too low of a score. Any novel with three pinned comments is hoghly likely to be garbage, and this one is no exception. Not to mention one that has to delete reviews to keep its score afloat, as if reviews on this site even mattered. Nothing else needs to be said.

Mainor_Kelly
Mainor_KellyLv13Mainor_Kelly

ngl this has to been one of the most brain dead things ive seen the story just gets rid of the character development and makes up whatever along the way for little to no development or to reaffirm the main character values like it has every single story. it feels like the author just left chatgpt open and asked to to write the same think with minor differences and the most filler it can

Mr_Babbles
Mr_BabblesLv15Mr_Babbles

after ch 700, Leonel becomes braindead, and the love interest becomes infuriating

genelvo
genelvoLv12genelvo

The biggest problem is the MC, the author basically spends the first couple of pages just jerking him off to show how great he is. I don't like perfect MCs.

Hanimated
HanimatedLv1Hanimated

Wrote a comment about this at chpt 10 and now im all caught up and i can safely say that the quality is still the same. Its just such a good novel i cant get over it. Tysm for putting this out here author, hope you all the best in with your writing and keep up the great work🤗

DaoistGocrVw
DaoistGocrVwLv11DaoistGocrVw

while I really enjoyed they zones I find that his plot armor is really annoying. like he happens to meet some bigshot that takes a liking to him every time and it gets old. also I get tired of constantly praising him and how cool and sharp he is with his aura or whatever. this is especially aggregious in terrain. the zones make up for these faults they are well written and interesting I just wish plot armor and constantly reminding the audience how hot and cool he is like a fanboy teen was toned down. he doesn't need every woman in his vicinity to get super attracted to him.

Ynohtna
YnohtnaLv10Ynohtna

Stressed. Another vent of my frustration. Reading this gave me a lot of joy as well as headaches. Almost in all important situation I remembered, Leonel(MC) ability seems a huge chunk of joke. I gave my all to consider that he lack experience but I still can't avoid having doubts about his ability. What's the point of a calculative mind if he keeps missing simple details such as exchanging star points for skill points? Another, he tends to leave lots of loose ends that kept biting him back later then, he'll say something about "never again" just for another kind of it happening. And his annoying bias to humanity, I know this can't be helped but after reading his experiences in their hands–I couldn't avoid to curse him time and time again because of his foolishness. "You kept simping–saying you want to go follow and be with Aina, yet, you kept almost dying that if not for the almighty plot armor you already ended this novel long ago."

Apoxia
ApoxiaLv15Apoxia

Wow, what a hidden gem! Not only is the world and character building detailed and intriguing, but the writing quality is amazing. The shameless author keeps his update schedule as promised too, novels of this quality are rare on webnovel. As far as the story goes so far, it's a mix of a cultivation and evolution story through the use of quests in historically themed 'dimensional zones' to strengthen the MC and earn rewards, with the potential foe the MC to move to higher planes as he becomes stronger. Imagine a best case mix of The Devil's Cage and Let me game in peace. Great job author, I can't wait to see where the story goes!

solbeck
solbeckLv12solbeck

honestly had quite a promising start but i’d say the drop off in quality is quite substantial. i’ve read the authors other works and they seem to all share the same problem of pacing, power scaling and character development. With my main gripe being the last point, too many times has Leonel reflected onto his past actions and makes a whole spiel about changing but never does and then he just keeps saying “he’s just a kid” as an excuse every single time. The romance itself is an issue, and this comes from a person who loves the genre but the interactions between leonel and fmc are not very interesting with pretty much zero chemistry between them.

mukomi
mukomiLv13mukomi

I honestly love this book most especially the romance plot cause i love romance and i most definitely love love love the fact that it is not harem cause then id be forced to drop it and i dont want that This book will take you down a spiral cause just when you think you have the male lead character figured out the author throws another curve ball at you Makes it all the more interesting

Battler83
Battler83Lv14Battler83

at chapter 568 This story is good, but it has a great many flaws that are making me consider putting it behind me. The world building and power system are well made, but the writing is a little repetitive. Too many repeated expressions in the writing and character descriptions are far too bland either describing characters as divinely attractive or just not at all, rather then actually giving them characteristics. The author's philosophical message is very unclear jumping between the idea you are either gifted or you are trash and conventional morality. The biggest issue in this story is the protagonist. It started out ok and continued to get worse as the story progressed first of all he is a paragon a person that can almost never do wrong and always makes the perfect choices. While this is not a bad character type and the author does give him a decent amount of immaturity he still comes of as moderately unrelatable. The biggest problem the protagonist faces is something that many novels of this genre face and I understand it can be hard to write a way around this, but please so many have fallen into this trap that you should see it coming. Snowballing, the character gains new power left and right and gains growth that causes him to skyrocket in ability without meaningful growth. It started out fine, but as time went on the author just started saying things like oh he has this power too and despite everything that has been said beforehand he can just bypass the world building set down. The author tries to compensate for this by explaining many things after the fact, but that still feels too close to deus ex machina and too often. This started off good and maintained it's quality for a while, but in the end it just became another generic cultivation novel. Author if you are reading this I just want to say I liked this series, but somewhere along the line it just fell into the same trap I have seen so many times before. To any readers still here congratulations for making it to the end and if someone has a dissenting opinion I want to hear it. I leave you with the message this series is good, but not great.

Gerald_Limpahan
Gerald_LimpahanLv1Gerald_Limpahan

Please Spoil what happened after Aina returned the Segmented Cube to Joel? She got married? felt like it's a forced plot and all so stopped reading by chapter 800+ because it got confusing.

mehmed_zepcan
mehmed_zepcanLv13mehmed_zepcan

love the story hate all the women characters and hate the main character personality 1000+ chapters in still think grampa was right in everything