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Review Detail of DaoistGocrVw in Dimensional Descent

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DaoistGocrVw
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while I really enjoyed they zones I find that his plot armor is really annoying. like he happens to meet some bigshot that takes a liking to him every time and it gets old. also I get tired of constantly praising him and how cool and sharp he is with his aura or whatever. this is especially aggregious in terrain. the zones make up for these faults they are well written and interesting I just wish plot armor and constantly reminding the audience how hot and cool he is like a fanboy teen was toned down. he doesn't need every woman in his vicinity to get super attracted to him.

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DaoistGocrVw
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actually to be clear I love this book. this review is out of a wish for the book to improve it is not to be taken as a negative review

lordsloth
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well I also find it a bit annoying to keep showing us how cool and indifferent he is but overall it is a good book👌