Lol, healing useless sick beggar turned to conquest against the Church and it's army of knights. That is ability of the writer to make an elefant out of the fly.... Honestly, i don't like it.

Who will play the game when you can't get experience yourself? What do you need your levels for in that case? Arn't they useless?

That is called being low level? What was the point getting in to the city through scavengers way then?

If you can not be sure in your wife even when you can control her through contract you are just a looser. Such person can not create the Empire.

She really is an idiot. The man literally came from sealed coffin alive and she finding it funny and joking??

Thats something illogical. If you serve somebody out of your own volition for all his life you can not betray him right after his dissapperience. Moreover they all his wifes, so share all their sercrets together. If they do not love him he will know because he controlled them literally. I do not see the situation described here possible. They will keep the empire as his and continue to look for him until the day they die. Continue to serve even after the death. Otherwise they would rebell even before he disapeared.

Devil is just a human word. It means nothing to Angel and Demons alike, they have their own languages. And as higher beings they do not need to communicate to tell own thoughts and feelings to others of their kind. And for humans something evil and hostile to them called devil. If it not hostile or evil to them it will not be called demon.

Looks like lvl1 noob trying to catch lvl1 rabbit in rpg game for 7 chapters already. It is so boring.... He just have to drop the game and go home. Leave it to capable players.

Here i see that the life of beings called specters heavily dependent on humans blood or corpses. In that case they have to take care about their food source (humans). Some of them are intelligent and extreamly powerful so they should understand if there will be no food they will die. Also intelligent being prefer the quality of food and it's taste over others. So the most powerful of them would kill other specters and protect their own food (humans) and make them prosper. Humans takes care about ships we are eating the same way. But i do not see it happen in the book so it's kind of illogical...

1. First of all the stupid orphanage owner... He can't even see through kids he raising for years??? 2. Second - useless MC who don't move a finger to protect his sister. If he just kicked those guys a little they would never touch his sister. 3. The guy who almost killed the mute girl just because he was upset? They are all children... 4. The hero in shining armor putting his nouse where it does not belong. Letting the scum escape. 5. The mute girl who is not thinking about herself but protecting the cristalls of her brother with her life afraid of his ire.... It does not matter how i look on it but there is no any sane person in this story. Just from the start 4 persons i strongly detest and the girl i can't understand. What good can come from such a story? I hardly can force myself to read any further.

Another dumb MC. 1. What matters most is your own power. Instead of opening a portal become powerful first then you can open as much portals as you wish. 2. MC is useless. He does not want to protect his own sister. His blood. Even if body not his the sister is a real relative of the body. The man who cares for himself only is useless for the world. If he exists or not does not matter.

If you are looking for Hi Tech you have to increase capabilities of your mind first and your body because your mind is a part of it. Then you can look for environment. Programming language is good but it will not make you smarter or stronger so that is wrong direction.

lol, the last step is the first one. You have to cover your track's before you even began to hack/scan. Other steps also not right. But let it go.

Why don't you just find the reason behind your expelling and take money from him? Then kill him and drop in the river. You know people afraid of death so he will give you all the money just make a good plan how to get them. Then kill him silently on night with knife and make it look like a robbery. Drop the body in the river and the water will destroy all the evidence from the body itself. Easy, simple and you do not have to bother about the dept and will even become rich. I quess this guy has a lot of money.

Do you really think that 100 Push up's 100 Crunches 100 Squat and 10 km run daily will make you strong?? Bro you forgot 100 pull up's. 50% of success is sport is rich and healthy food and sleep. And by doing so much sport from the beginning you will kill your own body... And in a long term this amount of activity is nothing much it will not reach your full potential. That's why it is stupid.

Man you were present when they accused you of plagiate and you did not know who did it? Don't you have a mouth to talk and clarify? Or you simply do not know how to talk? Or you afraid of people in the committee? That's bad. You were there and you know nothing about it. I can't imagine why?

Was people ever needed the gens to pilot a tank? It was never so. So it is really strange to must have it to pilot the Mech. Was not it explained that the mech is a tank in human form?

And who said that speaking early will scare your family? Maybe they will be happy to know that your are a genius.

Yes i was. I am living in war. I am from Israel. That is why i am writing this comment because i know what i am talking about. And if you are talking about the fantasy world. The people should show proper behavior for the person they are claiming to be. For example the assasins veteran should work quiet and plan and kill with one hit. Veteran warriors should plan and work in teams like special operations. Quiet and effective. Generals should know tactics, strategy and logistic staff e.t.c. They are all humans and should behave the same way as humans on the Earth. If they not it should be clarified that they are differnt from us and in what specifically. Or just mentioned that the book is written for children and all in it starting from the world and ending by persons behaviours are childish and unreal.

When the group of warriors fighting in enemy territory they are not talking. At most they giving signs to one another. This group looks like bunch of children playing an RPG game.