Reviews of Demon Queen Rebirth: I Reincarnated as a Living Armor?!

The obligatory five-star review of the author itself! Because this is my second novel, I can confidently say that my writing style has evolved a lot since my first novel (which is still going on if you want to check it out). However, I cannot escape from the small grammar mistakes here and there, so I will apologize in advance. This novel is about a very common and gloomy woman that suddenly died in a terrible car accident alongside her coworkers and was sent to a white space where a strange and lazy Transmigration God granted them a System designed to save humanity. Their task? Beta test it! Veronica's reincarnates as the daughter of the Demon King of the World of Kritias, named Anastacia. Her first life is filled with hardships and loneliness, but through her perseverance, she reached many things despite being talentless while having a bad cheat skill. However, even after growing so strong, she quickly discovers that her coworkers, the heroes, are in a completely different league than herself. In resume, she tries her hardest but dies horribly. To make things worse, the God that was backing the Heroes is insane and decides that piercing Veronica's soul with his Divine Power was a fitting end for her, diving her soul in two. Due to the will of two mysterious entities, however, both of her split souls reincarnate in... an incredibly similar world... but set in the past? One of her split souls becomes a Half-Demon Boy, son of a Demoness and a Farmer, while the other split soul reincarnates as a Living Armor inside a dangerous dungeon filled with deadly monsters that want to eat her despite being made entirely out of metal! Now watch as both protagonists go through their own hardships in their different lives, all of it to one day finally met with each other and help the people that they have sworn to protect in their previous life reach the prosperity they promised to them! This time, both of them will not fail, even if they have to one day confront that insane God once again. Monsters, Dungeon, Loot, Skills, Spells, Spirits, Demons, Elves, Beastmen, Level Ups, Job Changing, this novel has all of this juicy stuff! So please, give it a look!

Being an avid fan of Pancake's first novel, I gave this one a try. Needless to say, I really enjoy it so far! The best part is that I know I can count on quality from Pancakes. The synopsis is perfect and drew me in even more. The backstory is thourough and filling, and the whole split reincarnation ordeal is a brand new take (for me at least) on reincarnation! Kudos!

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lacks something unique but over the stable storyline and decent story progression speed. It resembles The Death Mage Who Doesn’t Want a Fourth Time too much not that it's completely a bad thing just a little less would be great still only my opinion of the story so far though it can change

I loved Epic of Caterpillar and this is just that but a little different so of course I like this too. the story is interesting and I am excited to see where it will go and for the possibility of a cross over between the 2 stories. The Writing Quality is much better than in the beginning of epic of caterpillar which is cool to see that the author has gotten better over time. The writing is similar to how Epic of caterpillar is now. The stability of updates is the same as the other novel and almost always consistent with the 10/11 chapters per week if not more. Story development is different from the other novel. In that novel you see the world though the MC's eyes so you only know as much as she does for the most part. While this novel seems to take a more narrator approach. The MC is much devolved in the begging of the story than I think Kireina was in the begging of her story which I don't think is bad or good just different. for world background just look at the auxiliary chapter to see. Overall I highly recommend reading if you like Epic of Caterpillar or any novel of this type.

dunno if it was on purpose but this feels like a bootleg the death mage doesn't want a fourth time, from the story to entire plot points, skill names and even character architypes and races. Reads like death mage but with extra steps.

I am writing this review after finishing the book but i will try to keep spoilers to the minimum. This is a book with two protagonists and its not like some other stories that claim to have more than one protagonist but still have a sort of main one in here both Veronica and Ervas are as relevant to the story as each other. throughout this story you will see many parallels between Veronica and Ervas despite being literally the same person they could be said to be polar opposites. veronica is cheerful ruthless a bit bloodthirsty has a bombastic personality . meanwhile Ervas is gloomy shy calm and collection and overall feels almost emotionless. despite their differences they get along quite well and complement each other later on you will even find traits from each of them in the other one as they help each other become more complete while keeping their own unique identity. overall expect a story where you will find both cruelty to their enemies and benevolence to their allies as well as both confidence in themselves and insecurity of being accepted expect things and their opposites yin and yang but merged together rather than being separated. I believe i struggled a bit with delivering the meaning i wanted to convey but i hope you try this book and as their story ends anyone familiar with pancake's novels will know that this is not the end but rather a whole new beginning where they start to interact more closely with the protagonists from the other novels of the shared universe and once again i am not saying goodbye but till we meet again.

It's a cool history with great potential and it's in the hands of a very talented author who is responsible for a great novel: Epic of cartipillar. Give it a chance, you won't regret if you like novels about reencanation, magic, skills and stupid gods. It's 5/5

very good novel and am a fan of his or her other work so 5⭐......and what i really anticipating about this novel is maybe there's a chance of this connected to the other novel of him.....and thinking about that really makes me want to read more.... you,yes you!!! you should read the other novel of him too....I [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

I like the book and all but there's a slight mistake in the beginning....how are the rank of monsters higher as he goes up to leave the dungeon when they should be lowering in rank instead....>.>

I feel that the main characters could have done more for the jobs system. If they used three types of daos one for the jobs themselves helping the system to generate different jobs to bring out more of the users potential, one for skill trees linked to each type of job to help tap into more of the potential of the jobs, and then a dao for job medals which can be created in two ways. One when one completes a job skill tree a job medal is created and two by using different materials to create unique job medals that could bring various kinds of effects.

I like this story. my favorite character is ervas igni. i hope he does not sevelop any romance before he has grown up at least to 16 years old. i hope he gets to like boys. because his other halfsoul likes girls. i like how the auther found a good reason for the story to be insanely long with how they have so much to do with the whole universe in play. i love the summoned monsters of Ervas. i can’t wait till we meet his mother and how she is gonna react to all this. i wonder hoe his mothers summoned monsters are.❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

I wonder if I am stupid ore not it has the same Leveling system from the death mage doesn't want a fourth life right. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

I love this book. The world is carefully built up, and very straightforward. I love this because instead of having to carefully think over the way things work, which in general are usually very vague because the author will want to keep a surprise for later in the book. I also love this book because of its competent grammar, good spelling, and loveable characters. I love some of the more slices of life chapters, and I also am overjoyed that the main characters don't start out with a super op world-destroying skill, or like godly stats or something like that. They don't have any super huge cheats, which is why it is so interesting to see the main characters grow from the bottom to the top, but not in a cliche way like most boring cultivation novels. The updates are stable, and lots of chapters come out every week. My only complaint is that sometimes, the author (PancakesWitch) will put stats at the end of the chapter, which takes up the word count. Instead, I would suggest just making extra chapters with these huge stat blocks, which aren't a necessity to read.

other than the off mistake here and there is really good and easy to read I love the story I just wish it would update with more chapters a day but I'm also good with the current update speed

Good. It flows. It has a good idea. 5 stars? Yeah because it just has some thing that keeps me reading, I like the idea of living Armour. On the other hand I love seen books below the popular view count. As i am also an author who just published my book 3 days ago. In 7k views so far. If you curios its called. "I am the Universe". Anyways, its sounding good so far i will add this to my library... cheers

shameless review of a fan, haven't read it, but knowing the author i give it my vote of confidence, not a fan of separated soul idea (no offense to other novels) unless we know that eventually will give higher power

Sou brasileiro vi alguns capítulos da novel antiga da autora, e decidi me aventurar nessa. A sinopse me chamou atenção é um prazer acompanhar essa novel com vossas senhorias.

If you can get around some of the annoying typos that happen, which I personally honestly kinda like they on more than one occasion add quite a bit of funny moments to the novel, this is one of the best novels I have read on the site. My standards are normally fairly low since this is self published work but I can absolutely say this exceeded them. Good job Pancakes!