so suggestion can you post the old version for people to read if they want to as some people like to compare and see the progress of a book plus you deleting the whole book and rewriting it here is messing with comments on the about book page

from what I remember it was great I hope this revision makes it better but author if it possible can you please post the old version as it's own story for new readers to read

great story still also author if you get the chance can you included cockvore like shoveing someone down the mc's dick and have them turn to sum or like just bath in the Mac's balls or whatever you want to call the main charaters cum makers anyway great story and if hope you are doing ok and fine I have had too many authors quit on a story because of stress and not takeing care of them self so plz keep your self healthy in sure the other readers wont mind plus breaks help you stay creative

its fine I hope that all goes well and you font have to worry about anything serious and good luck is always great too so good luck with the week

I finished the story yesterday night and it was great author please continue to update the book and take care of yourself

do far this looks like a great book that will see atleast a decent future not just a few chaps knowing the creator as best I can from this app and if hope author that you continue to be a great writer for futa story's though for reincarnated as the only human what about giveing her a skill to have chimera children that have many loving blood related damas

hey author is jus came back to the book and if wanted to know if you are still here and if you are please update though I doubt you are here still a good book

this book seems to me to be a rewrite/remake of one of my favorite books you made it was sad you stopped updateing it so I am really happy to see such a similar book even if it was not ment to be a rewrite

try writing a filler chapter from ravens or salems view in the world they are in it maybe fun and if you like it you can maybe make them books of their own

this is a great book I hope to see more chapters soon

its ok but can we have two today in stead

it's been three weeks can you please update i'm bored as hell an i'm running out of things nice to read oh great author 😥😥😥from here just need extra words

thank you

can you please post a new chapter but you author so you choose cant wait more than a week at a time unless distract my self🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂

again sorry to bother but can you upload a new chapter please and thank you

thank you for the chapter it was great and I can guess a little bit of what will happen maybe I suck a guessing but in my opinion that is the fun of it 😄😄🙂🙂

sorry to bother but did you forget or other matter like family or school as I've been waiting for a new and exciting chapter of this awesome novel

please update more often but still really good book and you dont have to even consider my request as you are the auther but still if you wouldnplease update more as I cant wwait for the nexted chapter

100% amazing story but author please write more of it is jus need filler for the rest so auther if you are basically over worked with current schedule then please rotate between your books for updates please and thank you

outstanding great and fun to read just want more chapters author please post more chapters you have been posting for your other books but nit this one or a few others with it that I belive you should rap up at least with a nice ending or make a convinceing excuse