Reviews of Card Apprentice Daily Log
Card Apprentice Daily Log
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Read this if you like the feeling of reading a dragon ball z boss fight style story from the pacing right of the bat. Lots of text for sometime unimportant stuff, like there are whole chapters of text about one ingredient for the card crafting and then multiply this by 3-4 for a whole card. Backflashes are really long too. Anyway, the main time line of the world see about 30 days of time progression in 1700 chapters...
Has a very well built world that is incredibly fascinating, the problem that you will run into is every time the story is moving well and at a good pace you will find the next ten chapters have almost no relevance to what the MC is doing. They will be in a life or death fight and all of sudden you spend 15 chapters going over another character who is uninvolved in this part of the story’s past. Or in the middle of a great arc there will be 5 chapters about someone’s random day or something that literally is not relevant to the story. It’s like the author didn’t know where to go so he almost puts side stories that are just boring randomly into the book
I don't even know where to start, but here we go. I would like to say that I loved the idea of grimoires and cards, but what bothers me is the size of useless content, fillers, characters with 10 pages of introduction that could be summarized in 2, the beginning starting on March 17th and chapter 1700 still being in the middle of April in the same year is what makes me wonder if the author wants to write a novel with more than 10k pages! really thinking about dropping this novel and waiting another 8 years to see if there is any good update or if it continues in the same year it started!
Just to give everyone an idea as to how the story is paced. At the beginning of every chapter the date time and location is posted since the book is a daily log. Chapter 1 is 17 March 2321 Chapter 1868 is 17 April 2321 Lol it’s kinda of a total drag. Premise is interesting but there’s just so much filler. I find myself skimming/skipping the vast majority of chapters especially if it’s fights without MC. There will be fights between side characters and MC’s subordinates where the whole chapter is just listing both peoples cards and their effects. Then MC’s subordinate wins and we never see there opponent again. Like, why was so much time spent on naming and describing every aspect of a persons card if they show up for 10 minutes in a battle then just die.
The main character and the side characters are people who just seem to be immeasurably stupid making Irrational decisions just for the sake of it.the main character is also a self entitled hypocrite accusing other people of being double standard and selfish when he is way worse than them.other than that it has world building.
La historia 4/5, el romance 2/5 (usaste todo los cliche posibles y el carácter del MC cambiaba demasiado, y Anna la diste vuelta como un panqueque en actitud así porque si), el tecnicismo.... heee vamos a ponerle 5/5 (me entretuvo bastante), el corte a los capítulos 1000/5 hiciste que una comida en burgenking fuera más de 10 capítulos y lo peor es que estas alargando y alargando cada ves más diciendo el mismo párrafo simplemente cambiando el contexto ( como por ejem, ahí un burro en la montaña y después pones en otro párrafo que la montaña sostiene a un burro y después te pones a explicar como la gravedad afecta al burro y la suposición de cómo el burro subió la montaña) [img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
