Review Detail of Dilan_Itter in Card Apprentice Daily Log

Has a very well built world that is incredibly fascinating, the problem that you will run into is every time the story is moving well and at a good pace you will find the next ten chapters have almost no relevance to what the MC is doing. They will be in a life or death fight and all of sudden you spend 15 chapters going over another character who is uninvolved in this part of the story’s past. Or in the middle of a great arc there will be 5 chapters about someone’s random day or something that literally is not relevant to the story. It’s like the author didn’t know where to go so he almost puts side stories that are just boring randomly into the book