Good story, my only problem being it’s too long, it’s been more than 1300 chapters and there’s NO actual progression. It took this long just for 1-2 months to pass in the story! Stop extending it so much, there’s too much redundant writing. I mean, why would you place full details on each card introduced and make that half the chapter when you can just slowly insert information like that into the story as it progresses?! Other than that it’s a gem of a story
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