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Hey! I've read the first few chapters of your story and I have to say, it was a very enjoyable read. I really like the characters and the world building you've done, it feels connected to reality but I think it's just me. I also like your wording a lot and it sets the tone really nicely. This is definitely a story that I'll finish, keep up the great work!
Wow, where do I start? First of all, I REALLY love your work so far. I love the way you describe the sceneries, everything, honestly, your descriptions were top-notch. Your book is VERY engaging and I really enjoyed reading it. You're an awesome writer, I hope you know that? Great job Author!โค๐น
I just took a peek at chapter 1 but itH caught my interest already. Honestly, I am already expecting that this book is already a hit. But it exceeds my expectation and I can only say wow! Amazing! The author is really giving his best on working out this book. I will look forward to this book to be at the topโคโคโค Lovelots, Cie-LbiTch
This is a good book. If you are a kind of person that want the mc to be carry along with the story without meaningless fight. Then this book in not good for that. It can of boring with the fight with no purpose. Mc who wake up from 200 years sleep became merchant is kind of dumb with no backstory to back it up. Anyway if like this kind of story it worth your time
I'm just at the intro stages of this story which does not bore me that is very important. The author is descriptive in the actions that brings the reader in without them feeling bored but more excited and interested to read more. The FL is good in that she is a strong but not stupid, since its early yet there is a lot of mysteries to her. In addition there are side characters yet to be fleshed out as a reader and I think the ML is already introduced. What is happening is chaos at the time of her arrival its an apocalpyse, rebellion and revolution all in one. At the same time the good ones/survivors trying to keep one's sanity, basic principles and survive intact. Looking forward to reading more. The author has done a good job so far, as such the story will be in my library for now.
Amazing Amazing work dear author ๐๐๐ I really love your work so much. The story is great and your description of the world is so good that it got me captivated to read more and more. I love the concepts of worlds, cyborg villains. Wow, you are doing great work. Keep up the good work. Interesting book.