sylverlight
Fantasy and Adventure writer. I also write Horror and Mystery when I'm bored so yah... hi!
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The delivery is good, word choices is exceptional, and the structure is great. Keep it up!
Overall the book is quite good to read. It is interesting and it has quite the potential to be a good novel later on.The writing quality was, I believe could've been better. Because the story was written in a first person pov, it was quite hard to delve into other things rather than the character.It is still so early to critic about story development and character design. The chapter's length were also quite short, so that's a little bit of a downer.The world background is fine. Anyway, keep it up and you will succeed soon!
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Oh I thought it was moans