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sylverlight

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Fantasy and Adventure writer. I also write Horror and Mystery when I'm bored so yah... hi!

2021-06-14 JoinedPhilippines
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  • sylverlight
    sylverlight9mth
    Replied to MrBtheNovelist
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    Tales of Mankind
    Fantasy · sylverlight
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    Replied to Theothegiant
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    Tales of Mankind
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  • sylverlight
    sylverlight9mth
    Posted

    This book is really good. It has a great story base and the backbone structure of the book is very well written. A highly recommended book!

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    Stuck as the Devil Against the World
    Fantasy · JaValentin
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  • sylverlight
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    Replied to Senecio_tako
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    Tales of Mankind
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  • sylverlight
    sylverlight9mth
    Posted

    You are a force to be reckoned with! That first six chaps was a rollercoaster of a ride. You're gonna smirk one second and then get sad by the sudden change of mood. Keep on improving author!

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    Adventure Beckons: The Seed of Evil
    Fantasy · Senecio_tako
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  • sylverlight
    sylverlight9mth
    Commented
    "Mom! Stop calling me little bun. I'm not a kid anymore." the boy replied while pouting. "Sure, Sure. Big bun." She said as she ruffled his grey hair. "Mom!" The boy looked like he wanted to voice his complaint, but he was quickly silenced by his mother's pats. After all, who could possibly defy such divine techniques? Afterwards, they sang the happy birthday song together and the boy blew out the candles.
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    Adventure Beckons: The Seed of Evil
    Fantasy · Senecio_tako
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  • sylverlight
    sylverlight9mth
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

    Ch 1 Beginning
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    A Transmigrator's Journey To Another World
    Fantasy · IvanelaSalove
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  • sylverlight
    sylverlight9mth
    Posted

    The story is great and the writing quality is superb! The delivery and the sentence structure was amazing and the choice of words was great! I would totally recommend this to other readers!

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    The Day The Earth Stopped Spinning
    Fantasy · MrBtheNovelist
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  • sylverlight
    sylverlight9mth
    Posted

    The writing quality is good, there are minimal grammar mistakes and the structure is exceptional. The story had been great so far. I would totally recommend this book!

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    PAUSED FOR QQC
    Fantasy · Theothegiant
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  • sylverlight
    sylverlight9mth
    Posted

    The writing quality is good. The delivery and the word structure is also great, and there are minimal grammar mistakes. Overall, the story is great and I would absolutely recommend this.

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    Ascendant: Struggle
    Fantasy · Haizao
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  • sylverlight
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    Replied to No_Harem

    There will be a lot of women throughout the series, but I'll keep Mikes's love interests to a minimal. Still, I can promise you that you'll love each one of them in the future. Enjoy reading!

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    Tales of Mankind
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  • sylverlight
    sylverlight9mth
    Posted

    The intricate style of writing can really enhance the quality of the work. The delivery and the world structure is exceptional. Overall, I like the novel. Keep it up!

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    Forged in Twilight - (Moved to a New Link)
    Fantasy · rory_dfgdfgs
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    Tales of Mankind
    Fantasy · sylverlight
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  • sylverlight
    sylverlight9mth
    Posted

    The delivery is good, word choices is exceptional, and the structure is great. Keep it up!

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  • sylverlight
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    Replied to Hemlet

    thank you 🤍

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    Tales of Mankind
    Fantasy · sylverlight
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  • sylverlight
    sylverlight9mth
    Posted

    Overall the book is quite good to read. It is interesting and it has quite the potential to be a good novel later on.The writing quality was, I believe could've been better. Because the story was written in a first person pov, it was quite hard to delve into other things rather than the character.It is still so early to critic about story development and character design. The chapter's length were also quite short, so that's a little bit of a downer.The world background is fine. Anyway, keep it up and you will succeed soon!

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    World Ender: I Destroy the Worlds for a Living
    Urban · yunjun
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  • sylverlight
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    Posted

    I never thought I'll be so immersed just reading a couple of chapters. The way how the sentences are structured and how to words flow was just near to perfection, it all seemed natural. Keep on writing Author! I'll be rooting from now on!

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    Villain Simulator
    Fantasy · Autistically
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  • sylverlight
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    Commented

    lol

    A face that could seduce even the most haughty of women with just a glance, and those piercing golden eyes that might even cause any lesbian to switch her orientation just for him.
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    Villain Simulator
    Fantasy · Autistically
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  • sylverlight
    sylverlight9mth
    Commented

    Oh I thought it was moans

    "Ahh!... Ugh!"
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    Villain Simulator
    Fantasy · Autistically
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  • sylverlight
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    Replied to OmegaLoneWolf

    I'm updating daily, look forward to it!

    Ch 6 Interwoven Tales
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    Tales of Mankind
    Fantasy · sylverlight
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