Reviews of Ascending to Supremacy
Ascending to Supremacy
Sinning_Sovereign
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Well, to be honest the first Arc makes me want to Dropped, but I do insist on reading it, and ultimately the Arc Bleach is very good, and so on. Thank you
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This is a really get Novel I should reccomend reading it but for a guy who's a God he really needs to go to more places with these 'Gods' I just read the recent chapter Next Realm and he goes the SAO world for what reason idk but he can literally destroy the world so I cant really see how the plot continues from there unless your just going to add to the harem and theres the issue with the people who reincarnated him, who where they, will he meet them as friends or enemies, we dont know so I think you should focus more on the godly realm stuff to thicken the plot
After the first 40chaps this novel gets better and better! 1. Author makes bold changes + interesting original changes to Canon plots in various worlds...Eg arrival much earlier than canon plot to influence things - a lot of original content from Author and MC isnt a side character observer he actively changes events in the plot 2. Humongous harem: MC builds a gigantic harem of best waifus...ultimate wish fulfillment right here - only downside is (im up to 120ish chaps), some girls get forgotten for a long time and MC usually forgets he has a harem when training for long periods...hope this doesnβt continue (will update after i catch up with latest) 3. World building is quite good, MCβs powers etc have been explained in ways to fit in various universes he travels to... 4. MC is OP but takes time to reach that level as different worlds have different systems of power, so not all his powers carry over completely, but he still has a definite advantage. First Arc kinda sucked for the first 30-40chaps but doesnβt continue to suck, author improves rapidly in chaps after that.
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in 30 years, the strength of less than 1 million in the world of Dragonball. where is becoming strong and getting new forms?it has an OP system but does not use it. He doesn't build his own life but helps others.skipping time and retelling a story where the main character just doesn't do anything for himself. He gets knowledge and powers that are useless and does not apply them. He's a stupid minor character who likes to watch the lives of others rather than live for himself.And the harem he wants. Lol. What does he do for the harem? leaves them unattended?Where is the skill located in multiple bodies with the same consciousness? where are the hints that he is always close to his women that he did not abandon them.......
Couldn't get past the Dragonball arc. It was going good up until the timeskip to 18 years old. Sora (MC) went from being the MC to being the side character to Home and the Z-fighters, he also built a harem of Bulma, Chi-Chi, Mai, etc and we never got any info on that, they just sort of lingered in the background. If you're into something like that then I guess you might enjoy this but overall very boring.
I was unable to complete the DBZ arch due to the enormous stupidity of MC. Being in the DBZ universe with a bunch of cheats and boasting that in a past life he became a master of many martial arts in 50 years, in 30 years he reached only 150,000 strength, it even reaches the point that his future self is dying because of his stupidity and laziness. He collects a harem but does not touch any girl even 50 years later, and instead of spending time with them, he trains Goku (it is not clear why), Goku has a son for a long time, but MC instead of at least losing his virginity, he trinerates son Goku, I wouldn't be surprised if some fat asshole fucks his wives behind his back.
You have a good start when you write this fanfic but after you skip too much plot, it became boring. I mean, you make summary of dragonball from bulma meet goku till goku got married in 1 chapter with several time skip. Even after that you still make another 5 or 10 years time skip. You writes a fanfic of a novel, so if you use time skip it becomes summary of the original novel not a fanfic anymore and everyone can write summary. And why MC have to babysitter goku and became sidechara? If he want to get stronger he have to beat strong opponent not to be a bystander. You write and give goku more scene than your own MC. it is MC not sidechara. He even suddenly got a harem. You never mentioned about chichi, how comes she suddenly be one of his harem? If you want make harem at least give some reasonable plot. i hope you can be better, but i'm sorry to stop at ch.20. (Sorry, English not my first language so there are a lot of mistake)
So far Iβve liked the story, albeit a little rushed. The author starts the story a bit before the legitimate plot begins. As the character is overpowered youβd expect cringe to be a factor towards the writing, thus far it seems to be fine. To my taste, a person who adores isekaiβs, this is quite nice. While this does have a harem, hopefully it will only have a few characters in it and isnβt overloaded with girls left and right. Bulma in the story seems extremely adorable.
If we talk about history, powers and combats it is interesting, rushed, but interesting, the MC becomes op fast and enemies appear more and more powerful that make him train and become more powerful too, the classic formula shounen but applied in the right way and it doesn't make things sick, which is why I read until chapter 100 but ... if we are going to talk about romance and harem, then it is very, very bad, similar to other novels on this site, female characters who fall in love in a paragraph, who fall in love with how "beautiful" the MC is, fall in love with the convenience of author since we never see them interacting with the MC and are already in love with him, since he entered a relationship with bulma I already thought it was strange because it was very fast, and from then on it only gets worse, the girls have no thoughts, no desires , dreams, accept the harem spontaneously as if it were something normal, this harem of onaholes was already problematic but I started to ignore it and continued reading normally, the problem was when he entered the soul society (bleach world), the author I wanted to change the MC's personality and justify with lineages, transforming the MC into something I like to call "master pokewoman" who throws his balls in every hole with a name, you know? while upholding the "i need to catch / f.uck them all" principle, the MC became lascivious and arrogant like random villains from xianxia, ββwanting to fuck every beautiful woman he sees until they get stupid with ahegao in they face, I thought he had come here to read a fanfic, not a ****, and there are so many girls in the harem that the MC doesn't have time for any, some of them there that I don't even know, most of them I don't even know why they are in the harem in the first place, except for the requests of readers who think with the penis, since this is a story that the reader can easily influence the author through comments. in chapter 75 i made a prediction, and it came true in chapter 100, which was that of his wolf Fenris becoming a wolf girl. its funny and sad to see that prediction happen, bcz it show the way this story is going... Sorry if it sounds offensive, but I really started to believe that the author is a student who has no experience with women and this fanfic is a collection of his wet dreams about sexy female anime characters. this story decayed in the same way as "bored gamer in another world", a very good but wasted potential.
what can be said about a work of 400+ chapters in which bed scenes are best described? nothing good. most of the events that would be worth describing occur according to the template: "we need to do something > the following sentence already says that the main character has traveled for some time, collected a harem and done things. then one lemon chapter. the next chapter describes how he gets a boost from the air. and so in a circle" a whole bunch of mistakes in the narration of the similarity, he or someone from his entourage learned something / entered a new sphere, etc. and after a few dozen chapters and a certain amount of time they do the same with the same kingdom or skill. getting girls and going to bed pleasures is far-fetched, in most cases it is not justified. the characters are like dolls, all similar to each other. the absence of any acceptable description of the world around the hero and characters. I finished reading hoping that well, maybe in this arch I will be able to see due to what the work has a score of 4.6? but in the end, either the spermataxic students evaluated it that way. or the estimates were screwed up by bots. I have no more ideas explaining such an assessment.
Good novel, the flaw is that you like to make MC act like a cringe person......act like a low key character. .. .. .. Always have to act respect to someone lower than him. .. Its a flaw in your novel. .. .and have so much chinese cultivation bullshit .. .. And rather have many power restriction. ....... Its a pity. .. No offense ..
