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Review Detail of keke171 in Ascending to Supremacy

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keke171
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If we talk about history, powers and combats it is interesting, rushed, but interesting, the MC becomes op fast and enemies appear more and more powerful that make him train and become more powerful too, the classic formula shounen but applied in the right way and it doesn't make things sick, which is why I read until chapter 100 but ... if we are going to talk about romance and harem, then it is very, very bad, similar to other novels on this site, female characters who fall in love in a paragraph, who fall in love with how "beautiful" the MC is, fall in love with the convenience of author since we never see them interacting with the MC and are already in love with him, since he entered a relationship with bulma I already thought it was strange because it was very fast, and from then on it only gets worse, the girls have no thoughts, no desires , dreams, accept the harem spontaneously as if it were something normal, this harem of onaholes was already problematic but I started to ignore it and continued reading normally, the problem was when he entered the soul society (bleach world), the author I wanted to change the MC's personality and justify with lineages, transforming the MC into something I like to call "master pokewoman" who throws his balls in every hole with a name, you know? while upholding the "i need to catch / f.uck them all" principle, the MC became lascivious and arrogant like random villains from xianxia, ​​wanting to fuck every beautiful woman he sees until they get stupid with ahegao in they face, I thought he had come here to read a fanfic, not a ****, and there are so many girls in the harem that the MC doesn't have time for any, some of them there that I don't even know, most of them I don't even know why they are in the harem in the first place, except for the requests of readers who think with the penis, since this is a story that the reader can easily influence the author through comments. in chapter 75 i made a prediction, and it came true in chapter 100, which was that of his wolf Fenris becoming a wolf girl. its funny and sad to see that prediction happen, bcz it show the way this story is going... Sorry if it sounds offensive, but I really started to believe that the author is a student who has no experience with women and this fanfic is a collection of his wet dreams about sexy female anime characters. this story decayed in the same way as "bored gamer in another world", a very good but wasted potential.

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Sinning_Sovereign
Sinning_SovereignAuthorSinning_Sovereign

Haha, well sorry about that. When I first made this fanfic, I was going to head into a wish fulfillment sort of area, and it’s not that I don’t have much contact with women, it’s that it gets tiring trying to write scenes wear the Mc interacts with the women and they gradually fall in love with him. I’m sorry that I tried to skip all love building, I will try to fix that in future chapters in ways I could possibly do it. But I probably won’t cut down on the amount of women introduced. That is, until he goes into cultivation worlds. Thanks for reading, and I’m glad you lasted this long reading. I’m sorry my fanfic wasn’t up to your liking, I hope you find your destined novel/fanfic/story

AizenJabberwock
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Then don't? Its not written anywhere that the MC HAS to get X amount of females every X amount of chapters.. if you don't know how/what to write to make relationships interesting, then don't have the MC enter relationships in the first place!

Sinning_Sovereign:Haha, well sorry about that. When I first made this fanfic, I was going to head into a wish fulfillment sort of area, and it’s not that I don’t have much contact with women, it’s that it gets tiring trying to write scenes wear the Mc interacts with the women and they gradually fall in love with him. I’m sorry that I tried to skip all love building, I will try to fix that in future chapters in ways I could possibly do it. But I probably won’t cut down on the amount of women introduced. That is, until he goes into cultivation worlds. Thanks for reading, and I’m glad you lasted this long reading. I’m sorry my fanfic wasn’t up to your liking, I hope you find your destined novel/fanfic/story
Sinning_Sovereign
Sinning_SovereignAuthorSinning_Sovereign

Well I’m already planning to cutdown on the introduction of many more women in the next few arcs. The next fanfic after this one will only have like, 9-10 women (maybe 2-4 more if I decide to go a certain way), and that’s for a fanfic that will last for at least 1,000 or more chapters.

AizenJabberwock:Then don't? Its not written anywhere that the MC HAS to get X amount of females every X amount of chapters.. if you don't know how/what to write to make relationships interesting, then don't have the MC enter relationships in the first place!
Sinning_Sovereign
Sinning_SovereignAuthorSinning_Sovereign

Thanks for pitching in some ideas!

AizenJabberwock:Then don't? Its not written anywhere that the MC HAS to get X amount of females every X amount of chapters.. if you don't know how/what to write to make relationships interesting, then don't have the MC enter relationships in the first place!
miitrim
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Nooooooooo..a new reader here ,pls don't decrease harem getting rate, it's like a selling point for this novel(wish fulfillment can be done good),,,instead read some good harem novels and get ideas of dialogues like lust knight or shoujou grand summoning or the wish of the dragon etc...i like this novel because of its simplicity.no drama for getting or managing harem .and you know it can be upto many people's taste

Sinning_Sovereign:Well I’m already planning to cutdown on the introduction of many more women in the next few arcs. The next fanfic after this one will only have like, 9-10 women (maybe 2-4 more if I decide to go a certain way), and that’s for a fanfic that will last for at least 1,000 or more chapters.
Sinning_Sovereign
Sinning_SovereignAuthorSinning_Sovereign

haha, well it's not like I will deliberately lower the rate of women he gets, its just that the women in the next couple of worlds will turn less and less. after all, it is a cultivation world. but the interactions and stuff like that will sort of rise. So don't worry much about the harem rate. . Hope you continue reading!

miitrim:Nooooooooo..a new reader here ,pls don't decrease harem getting rate, it's like a selling point for this novel(wish fulfillment can be done good),,,instead read some good harem novels and get ideas of dialogues like lust knight or shoujou grand summoning or the wish of the dragon etc...i like this novel because of its simplicity.no drama for getting or managing harem .and you know it can be upto many people's taste
miitrim
miitrimLv4miitrim

Ofc👍🏼

Sinning_Sovereign:haha, well it's not like I will deliberately lower the rate of women he gets, its just that the women in the next couple of worlds will turn less and less. after all, it is a cultivation world. but the interactions and stuff like that will sort of rise. So don't worry much about the harem rate. . Hope you continue reading!