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VyonZee
VyonZeeLv43yrVyonZee

Well, to be honest the first Arc makes me want to Dropped, but I do insist on reading it, and ultimately the Arc Bleach is very good, and so on. Thank you

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Ascending to Supremacy

Sinning_Sovereign

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Sinning_Sovereign
Sinning_SovereignAuthorSinning_Sovereign

I'll try fixing the first arc when I'm done with this first part

Overlord_1000
Overlord_1000Lv4Overlord_1000

I advise you that when it is necessary to repair it that thing to do it right away especially if it is the first thing that people will read because it is what will push people or not to read the story.

Sinning_Sovereign:I'll try fixing the first arc when I'm done with this first part
MegaMitochondria
MegaMitochondriaLv13MegaMitochondria

Hello! Will there be any R-18 scenes?

Sinning_Sovereign:I'll try fixing the first arc when I'm done with this first part
Man_of_culture_69
Man_of_culture_69Lv2Man_of_culture_69

Is r-18?

Sinning_Sovereign:I'll try fixing the first arc when I'm done with this first part
Sinning_Sovereign
Sinning_SovereignAuthorSinning_Sovereign

some scenes closer to the end.

Man_of_culture_69:Is r-18?
EliteTinyTim
EliteTinyTimLv4EliteTinyTim

the first arc is SOO BAD i wanted to drop multiple times actual snore fest 😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴

Allpowerful
AllpowerfulLv4Allpowerful

Bleach is trash

Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv4Haku_Ouroboros

Pic MC?

Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv4Haku_Ouroboros

Pic MC?

Sinning_Sovereign:I'll try fixing the first arc when I'm done with this first part