Well, to be honest the first Arc makes me want to Dropped, but I do insist on reading it, and ultimately the Arc Bleach is very good, and so on. Thank you
Sinning_Sovereign
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LIKEI advise you that when it is necessary to repair it that thing to do it right away especially if it is the first thing that people will read because it is what will push people or not to read the story.
Sinning_Sovereign:I'll try fixing the first arc when I'm done with this first part
Sinning_Sovereign:I'll try fixing the first arc when I'm done with this first part
Sinning_Sovereign:I'll try fixing the first arc when I'm done with this first part
Sinning_Sovereign:I'll try fixing the first arc when I'm done with this first part