Review Detail of KuroiSenkoGr in Ascending to Supremacy

Sinning_Sovereign:The girls weren't 12, I have clarified that multiple times. Yhwach dying was explained with the Destruction Energy which is essentially Hakai, a single touch and you are erased from reality. And yes, he is OP after two days at the academy because he already knows how to fight with his fists and knows how to wield a sword, with his ability to understand everything faster than everyone and his monstrous talent, which is also explained in the first chapter (when it is explained that Sora has, indeed, mastered all Martial Arts on Earth), he was able to master Kido and Shunpo as quickly as he did. Of course he would be OP. . And this is how the story was supposed to be, I have also explained that this fanfic is a wish fullfillment and that the MC will be OP. And the only thing Sora does, is to make the women more acceptable of his other partners. . . . But aight. You can drop now, thanks for making it this far.

KuroiSenkoGr:it is the start of the bleach anime they weren't even going on a high school that's my draw line for me but the thing that I had the most problem wasn't the mindset of let's go catch them all (girls) of the mc but the time it took him to get them not in the time frame of the fic but the time frame as a novel. If you made the MCS interaction with the girls from start to until we get the notion that they like him would be way better for me and not 1 or 2 lines that basically says they like him that's it...One of the interactions that would have liked to see more was the one with Tatsuki that the mc just teased her and didn't just take her to his office to f her. Either way, I loved the story structure that you have built and how you make the words flow naturally but personally I get bored of chapters that are only wish-fulfillment and nothing else with something to keep me interested i.e some dialogue or a situation every other chapter would be good that didn't finish in 3-7 lines of text. The last couple of things I want to say is, I saw the battle with Yhwach as a precursor to what is to come in future battles it was a smack fest that it didn't saw ous a lot of his abilities so we can appreciate how powerful the Mc is or maybe you can show us the new worlds through the MCS eyes(even thou we know about them) as he goes along through his journey of it. Keep up the good work and keep writing I will check you out if you publish any other fics :D

Sinning_Sovereign:Well thanks a lot! Im pretty sure the next fanfic I write shall be better, I am still pretty new to writing so thanks! And yeah, I know, I’ve seen that problem multiple times. I tried slowly introducing the women, but I don’t have much talent in writing them into the harem, I’ll try for sure, in Highschool DxD. And once again, thanks for the review!

JaimeMedeiros:author-sama you can tell me if there is a yuri in the harem, so that I don't have to stop reading in the middle of FF because of that

Sinning_Sovereign:The girls weren't 12, I have clarified that multiple times. Yhwach dying was explained with the Destruction Energy which is essentially Hakai, a single touch and you are erased from reality. And yes, he is OP after two days at the academy because he already knows how to fight with his fists and knows how to wield a sword, with his ability to understand everything faster than everyone and his monstrous talent, which is also explained in the first chapter (when it is explained that Sora has, indeed, mastered all Martial Arts on Earth), he was able to master Kido and Shunpo as quickly as he did. Of course he would be OP. . And this is how the story was supposed to be, I have also explained that this fanfic is a wish fullfillment and that the MC will be OP. And the only thing Sora does, is to make the women more acceptable of his other partners. . . . But aight. You can drop now, thanks for making it this far.

Alfha_Robby:this author is awesome, most author wiukd delete anything below 4 stars yet this author tolerate & reply these review without typical tnt_subho arrogance which is a good thing, im gonna read this story knowing that this is a wish fulfillment harem power crap [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

SageOfSins:U bot account or something??

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SageOfSins:U bot account or something??

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Sinning_Sovereign:The girls weren't 12, I have clarified that multiple times. Yhwach dying was explained with the Destruction Energy which is essentially Hakai, a single touch and you are erased from reality. And yes, he is OP after two days at the academy because he already knows how to fight with his fists and knows how to wield a sword, with his ability to understand everything faster than everyone and his monstrous talent, which is also explained in the first chapter (when it is explained that Sora has, indeed, mastered all Martial Arts on Earth), he was able to master Kido and Shunpo as quickly as he did. Of course he would be OP. . And this is how the story was supposed to be, I have also explained that this fanfic is a wish fullfillment and that the MC will be OP. And the only thing Sora does, is to make the women more acceptable of his other partners. . . . But aight. You can drop now, thanks for making it this far.

Worn_out_by:Note how you gleam over the fact that you wrote a story about an mc hypnotizing/ manipulating people into a relationship with him (against their will considering they didn’t want it before hand all things considered)