Nisiris
This is not HP fanfick. There is very minimal amount of HP lore and style here. Author butchered anything that resemblet HP style. MC is OP and its cringe ... you can feel forcefullnes of mc in everything he do. Forced plot and relly pointless. Nathing is explained well its all as if author writed from his head without any planing.
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A very interesting rwby fanfic.πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
Love the story!! Better plots, better characters, better development all over!! Writings needs a few work and bam* We got the best RWBY fanfic.. [[Just a question for thought :- Why didn't you add the knowledge relic (which is a jinn in lamb that can answer three questions for a century and have many knowledge or very knowledgeable) in the library (royal library?) where this relic may show some kind of usefulness?
I like the story and the way multiverse is being introduce but I the only problem of mc is him being to subservient to girls and like if they just offer their self to him even if he knows that they just want something from him just accept. He is also a bit hypocrite saying he loves his family but just accept any girls even if their time is shorten in meet up.