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Iteq24_24

Iteq24_24

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2022-04-15 JoinedGlobal
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  • Iteq24_24
    Iteq24_2420h
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    Look I get the grammatical errors but the fact that you didn't even inform yourself on the characters of the dxd world is stupid because you know to write a fanfiction you need to know the original story 馃檮

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    DxD: King of Denial
    Anime & ComicsNparks141k
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  • Iteq24_24
    Iteq24_241mth
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    Everyone should know that this is a Chinese translated story so expect bad grammar and a shitty story, ignore the false 5 star reviews they are all false

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    Before I Died, I Kissed Rias Gremory
    Anime & ComicsSoftCrow
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  • Iteq24_24
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    This is one of the only truly good danmachi stories keep it up author

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    Inspired Enchanter [Danmachi]
    Anime & ComicsLordDylz
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  • Iteq24_24
    Iteq24_241mth
    Posted

    The usual greedy as fuck author don't read this

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    Cyberpunk Edgerunners: Hacker System
    Anime & ComicsDarkGamerZ
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  • Iteq24_24
    Iteq24_241mth
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    I hope you keep it up author I wouldn't want this story to just dissappear

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    This platform has soul!
    Video GamesCharlottess
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  • Iteq24_24
    Iteq24_241mth
    Posted

    This story is bad no development orrid grammar and bad overall

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    DxD: The Lustful Gamer
    Anime & ComicsOrael
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  • Iteq24_24
    Iteq24_242mth
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    This is a masterpiece of a story dear author, keep it up

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    Breaking Good Or How I learned to stop worrying and love the Blue Meth
    TVUdayWrites
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  • Iteq24_24
    Iteq24_242mth
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    This story started good but became bad fast, it's full of grammatical errors and the story seems to not go anywhere he's interacting with rumi less and less, and for my personal opinion roboco and the androids shouldn't exist and only ruin the story more

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    Imagine Breaker in MHA
    Anime & ComicsGeraint124x
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  • Iteq24_24
    Iteq24_242mth
    Posted

    This story is slowing down incredibly fast , I don't know why but at the start it was going well now we see less Peter every chapter and it's becoming boring

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    I'm Spider-Man (MCU)
    MoviesAlienWarlord
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  • Iteq24_24
    Iteq24_242mth
    Replied to Iteq24_24

    Doing nothing for a lot of chapters

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    Path to Strength
    Anime & ComicsTheJiujitsuGuy
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  • Iteq24_24
    Iteq24_242mth
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    The story was better at the start at least it was going at an reasonable pace but now you don't see the Mc do nothing but stand around

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    Path to Strength
    Anime & ComicsTheJiujitsuGuy
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  • Iteq24_24
    Iteq24_242mth
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    Keep it up author this story is good, good job

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    DxD: Gorou Hyoudou Reborn
    Anime & ComicsHonour_PooP
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  • Iteq24_24
    Iteq24_242mth
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    Don't read this book it exists only to make you go to his patreon

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    In Black Clover with a System
    Anime & ComicsHaremGodZ
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  • Iteq24_24
    Iteq24_242mth
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    Good God the grammar is atrocious you should really work on getting a translator or something

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    Danmachi: Honored One
    Anime & ComicsUnknownducky
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  • Iteq24_24
    Iteq24_242mth
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    This is a good story so far I hope you continue to write it good job

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    Becoming Usopp
    Anime & ComicsHorny_Gentleman
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  • Iteq24_24
    Iteq24_242mth
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    This story has more publicity than chapters the author ask for power stones and patron don't read

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    Danmachi: Hentai System
    Anime & ComicsHentaiGodZ
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  • Iteq24_24
    Iteq24_243mth
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    You are finally back good author this is a joyous day

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    MHA: Justin Heller
    Anime & ComicsBeaulenSmith
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  • Iteq24_24
    Iteq24_243mth
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    Is there no app to translate or correct grammar that you could utilize freely? For clarity I'm just asking and am not being in any way sarcastic or trying to be offensive still thanks for the clarification dear author

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    One piece : voyager
    Anime & ComicsReaperOnline
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  • Iteq24_24
    Iteq24_243mth
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    You should work on getting a translator for your story because the Chinese energy is showing more and more in the new chapters still if a person could work around reading Chinese sayings this story is not that bad

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    One piece : voyager
    Anime & ComicsReaperOnline
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  • Iteq24_24
    Iteq24_243mth
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    Someone should go and check out the author mental health if he think that r.. E is ok

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    Cyberpunk's Singular Peculiarity
    Video GamesNiggross
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