Look I get the grammatical errors but the fact that you didn't even inform yourself on the characters of the dxd world is stupid because you know to write a fanfiction you need to know the original story 🙄

Everyone should know that this is a Chinese translated story so expect bad grammar and a shitty story, ignore the false 5 star reviews they are all false

This is one of the only truly good danmachi stories keep it up author

The usual greedy as fuck author don't read this

I hope you keep it up author I wouldn't want this story to just dissappear

This story is bad no development orrid grammar and bad overall

This is a masterpiece of a story dear author, keep it up

This story started good but became bad fast, it's full of grammatical errors and the story seems to not go anywhere he's interacting with rumi less and less, and for my personal opinion roboco and the androids shouldn't exist and only ruin the story more

This story is slowing down incredibly fast , I don't know why but at the start it was going well now we see less Peter every chapter and it's becoming boring

Doing nothing for a lot of chapters

The story was better at the start at least it was going at an reasonable pace but now you don't see the Mc do nothing but stand around

Keep it up author this story is good, good job

Don't read this book it exists only to make you go to his patreon

Good God the grammar is atrocious you should really work on getting a translator or something

This is a good story so far I hope you continue to write it good job

This story has more publicity than chapters the author ask for power stones and patron don't read

You are finally back good author this is a joyous day

Is there no app to translate or correct grammar that you could utilize freely? For clarity I'm just asking and am not being in any way sarcastic or trying to be offensive still thanks for the clarification dear author

You should work on getting a translator for your story because the Chinese energy is showing more and more in the new chapters still if a person could work around reading Chinese sayings this story is not that bad

Someone should go and check out the author mental health if he think that r.. E is ok