sayanth_sk
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my fellow readers, this is a plagiarised work. the original story is in archive of our own and is called the overpowered gamer by percypendragon3. its supposedly completed on that. shame on you sh!tty theif for stealing another person's work and trying to profit of it by using patreon. your work shall be reported as well
I think they would still be considered as little girls at this point right
I know. I mentioned the earlier statement to just give them the benefit of doubt
this is a very poor form of writing. I can understand trying to get the story to move forward while at the same time showing small snippets of the Princess reaction. its a half baked idea with poor execution. the entire princess reaction stuff could've been executed in one decent length chapter. but by breaking her reaction into many different parts it stops immersion and continuity, moreover it feels dragged out.
the least you could do is make sure that the names are correct before posting a chapter. this is the second time where you have written aenys instead of rhaenys.
pre-teens . all of them are either 11 or 12 with the exception of maybe hermione as she was slightly older by almost a year.
bruh, you were clueless even with your knowledge of the memories . Guess he's gonna be even dummer than usual
I'm surprised that there aren't much comments in the chapters. loving this so far. keep up the good work author
pulling out the arrow is a dumb move. you lose more blood that way
this is getting really idiotic
what a load of bull. this version of riser is basically all bark and no real bite
this guy is soo fudging inconsistent with his memories. he knows ophis but suddenly doesn't know great red. at times he knows details of the plot but then at other times he's so bloody ignorant of things he is supposed to know.