Bruh idek what I'm doing anymore 💀💀💀
prob not tbh. I think I saw one that was like 300 on a dif book
So far, I'm on chapter 38. The chapters are pretty long compared to other ffs though. So, I would say overall it's pretty good. I really enjoy it so far. But as far as what I don't like? First, the pace is very slow, and the meeting with the main cast doesn't seem to be coming anytime soon. Second, the perspective in which the story is told... It is very dissociating. It is third person, which is fine, but the story is told in a way where you can never truly know anyone's thoughts, or how they think. + It is told from literally any perspective except for the main characters. I have nothing on the main characters personality, because most of the time he's a background character in his own story. It's kind of a weird problem for a book to have.... But I hope the tone changes soon, because I like it a lot so far. Third, I would say the way Azula is interpreted is off. So far she is the only character from the main show that really gets any screen time, so I cant' say for sure if that would be an issue for all the main characters or just her... but I feel like the fic has turned her complex and interesting character into a simple love interest. Granted, the way the love is painted out is very good, it's more so that it feels like a downgrade from the canon version. The canon Azula is just a very fascinating character, but that sort of quirkiness isn't present when shes painted as a lovestruck dove.
Tbh scorpion as a mascot is pretty fokin cool. I've never seen a webnovel pick a scorpion. Normally its something cliche like a raven or sum
Well, to be real I don't speak in C's. But here in texas, anything under 60f is chilly. The moment a lick of ice shows up full panic ensues.
Would it be canon for such a high ranking person to treat royalty with such disrespect? I mean, this is young master levels of disrespect here, however little they actually like the princess, you would think they would at least frame an act of modesty.
Dear lord I hope not.
I would rather just a solo azula tbh
Thats one of the water bender prisoners, not a soldier lol
I would argue that mc is just replacing the leash with one of his own, a better leash ofc
Now we need a cabbage man equivalent for every nation I don't make the rules, I simply obey them ¯\_( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)_/¯
I've been thinking about something similar to this for a while. In short, I feel like the way you are treated greatly affects the way you act. I feel like i can tie that line of thought into my personal life a bit...
We read books to run away from the real world... So why are you shoving your real world politics into the books bro? Quit contaminating the escapism!
Shoot. I take back my villainess shipping. Ms Goldilocks being a masochist changes everything, this boat has turned into a battleship, and now I say goldi + mc forever.
Strong not string*
The only advice I can give is to try and keep science jargon away from the story. I see a lot of fics try to explain the science of why what the book is doing actually makes sense, but it ends up only needlessly complicating everything. It's a book, it doesn't always need to make sense as long as it's fun.
So far hes just a slightly different homelander lol. Why have a reincarnation if your'rejust gonna have mc act like the original? You could have just done an au with a slightly changed homelander.